strangetomato: (Default)
[personal profile] strangetomato
Prompt: Johnny’s Fear
Characters: Johnny Smith, Ripp Grunt
Wordcount: 100
Imagecount: 0
Warnings: None

I've been thinking about the story today. I'm hoping to get Chapter 31 (part 1) up tonight, and this little snippet comes from part 2 of the same chapter. I don't think it will show up in the story from Johnny's point of view, since I've already written it more from Ripp's, so it's a little extra thing.






He stood on the balcony, watching the sun rise, just as he had that morning after his abduction.

It was all coming together. He understood their reasons. They were afraid, and he knew that fear now. It was his fear too.

They were all going to die.

“They” used to be a distant concept, but it wasn’t. It was his heritage, his family. If they weren’t safe, then maybe he wasn’t either.

Was his family safe?

He heard footfalls inside the apartment. They were heavy, and they were racing around, searching for him. They were Ripp’s.

What did Ripp fear?




 

Date: 2009-03-30 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindyanne1.livejournal.com
*gets chills*

Seriously. I'm sitting here covered in goosebumps. D: Does this have anything to do with the cliffhanger from the last installment?

Love the anticipation... I can't wait to find out what happens! :)

Date: 2009-03-30 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leskuh.livejournal.com
JOHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNY

BABY I LOVE YOU ;_;

Date: 2009-03-30 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missgan.livejournal.com
Can't wait can't wait can't wait for Chapter 31!

Oh Johnny, I hope everything turns out for the best. :S

Date: 2009-03-30 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muslemura.livejournal.com
Oh Johnny!!

Date: 2009-03-30 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] telephonication.livejournal.com
Wow. I hope you understand the amount of emotion that your story/writing brings to your audience. I feel so scared and anxious. I need to know what happens!

Date: 2009-03-30 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] music-simbol.livejournal.com
Where is the drabble request post? I can't find it. :( I feel like I requested something, but I can't remember and I wanted to check.

And in this line, "I was his heritage, his family." shouldn't it be "It was his family"? I think you forgot the T. :D

Date: 2009-03-30 08:10 pm (UTC)
ext_122042: (Default)
From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
You're right, I did forget the T. Thanks. XD I fixed it.

There is a link to the request post in the sidebar. You did give me some prompts for the Grunt brothers, if I recall correctly. (I've been slacking on my drabbles, but I do intend to do them all eventually.)

Date: 2009-03-30 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] music-simbol.livejournal.com
The one about Tank, you've kinda already done since you've revealed his feelings about Lucy. But of course, feel free to elaborate and get very very detailed. *hint hint wink wink*

Date: 2009-03-30 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hannahspring.livejournal.com
"What did Ripp fear?"
Now that's what I'd like to know, too. :) I mean, well, I do a little, but I want more explanations! Can't wait for the next chapter. Johnny seems so troubled, it's sad. :(

Date: 2009-03-30 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] showercapfrog.livejournal.com
Ohhh. It makes me sad and it's only a hundred words!

Date: 2009-03-31 10:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaryssobellus.livejournal.com
Ooooo... *suspense*

Date: 2009-04-04 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 80sfiend.livejournal.com
Ooooo. This is good :D

Profile

strangetomato: (Default)
Strange Tomato

November 2017

S M T W T F S
   1234
567891011
121314 15161718
19202122232425
2627282930  

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Sep. 8th, 2025 11:21 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios