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Warnings: language, sexual situations


Chapter Twenty Four

Part One





Edie Worthington was just returning home after a morning of recording with her band, Llama Dance Party. Her longtime girlfriend, Val, greeted her as she entered the apartment.




"Busy morning?" Val asked.

"Yeah. Lots of recording"

"How'd it go?"




"Oh, really well," Edie said, "I'm just exhausted. I'll be fine after I grab a shower."

"Yeah, you're still sweaty."

"Nothing like a vigorous morning workout." Edie mockingly flexed her arms. "I have forearms of steel! Who needs to go to the gym, when you have a drum kit?"

Val laughed.




"I'll make some lunch. You go on and take that shower, and it will be ready when you get out."

"You're the best, Val."

"Oh, and Frances called. I nearly forgot."




The phone rang, and Frances was happy to hear his sister's voice when he answered it.




"You were looking for me, Frances Jules?" She always got him with the childhood name.




"Yes, EDITH." He countered by using her full name, knowing that this bothered her about as much as his middle name bothered him. "How are you?"




"I'm great. So what's up, Frances?"

"Would you be interested in going for coffee? I need to get out of here for a while."




Frances glanced over to where Tank and Kendall were sitting together, deep in conversation. Despite his claims that Kendall was nobody special, Tank had been seeing a lot of her lately, and she had been showing up at their house too.




Frances didn't want to hate Kendall, but he really couldn't help himself. She had Tank's attention, one way or another. She liked him, and she had the guts to actually do something about it. She had the courage to do what Frances did not.




"Is everything okay, Frances?"




"Yes, Edie. I'm fine. I'll explain when I see you."

"Okay. Let's meet at The Golden Cup. The usual."




"Okay." Frances smiled. He could always count on Edie. He called a cab, and walked into the kitchen to wait for it.




He could have called home for a driver to come pick him up, but the idea of that made him feel physically ill lately. Any reminder of his wealth and inheritance did. He really felt the pressure, more and more. He'd get the occasional call from his mother, or a few choice words from Lillian, and every bit of contact with his family only served to drive the facts further home. He may as well call a cab, he figured. He may as well see what his options really were. He never heard from his father, but he didn't need to. He knew what he'd say.




The cab pulled up to the house, and Frances walked out to meet it, barely glancing into the living room as he walked past.




As he approached the door, he felt two pairs of eyes turn to look over at him, but he didn't look back.




Edie was waiting for him outside the coffee shop when he arrived.

"About time you showed up," she said, "I'm dying for a caffeine fix."

"Traffic was terrible."

"It's that time of day." They headed inside.




"So," Edie began, "Will you be having the usual, Frances?"

"Espresso for me, today," he said.

"Oh, really..." Edie raised an eyebrow. "Well, this must be something big." Frances was usually more of a sugar and cream type.




"So, what's up, Frances?'




"It's Tank," he said.




"Why am I not surprised?" Edie sighed.

"Look. I know what you're going to say," he began, "and yes, you did tell me so, but Tank..."




"Well, he sort of has a girlfriend now. I think. Maybe."

"He 'maybe' has a girlfriend?" Edie's look of pity said it all. "Oh, Frances, dear..."




"Well, they don't really 'date', as such, but she's been hanging around."

"You don't still think he might be gay, do you?"

Frances just frowned.




"Frances!" she said, "You have to get over it, already. Do I need to hit you over the head with the stick of reason? Do I have to drum some sense into you?" Edie was becoming seriously concerned about him.

He sighed. "I know, Edie. I know."




He did know, didn't he? He wasn't stupid, he was just in denial. Tank obviously liked women. He had been talking to that Ophelia girl at the party too. Frances had heard their conversation, from where he was eavesdropping. They didn't spell it out, exactly, but something had obviously happened there.

Okay, so Tank liked women. That didn't completely destroy his chances. Frances still clung to the hope that maybe, just maybe, Tank might like men too. It wasn't impossible. Plenty of people were like that. Frances obviously envied anyone who had a choice in the matter, since he never did. His life would be a whole lot easier if he was even remotely interested in women.




He sighed. Even if Tank did have a choice, why would he pick Frances over someone like Kendall? She had the advantage, not just in her obvious charm and beauty, but she was far bolder. She liked Tank, and she had the guts to do something about it.




He would never be able to do that. Especially not now. Or would he? Was it better to take a chance, and risk losing even Tank's friendship? If he didn't, he might regret it forever.




"I know what you're going through, Frances," Edie said, "It can be hard to let go, especially if you've invested so much time and energy into nurturing that crush, but you really should consider moving on."

"I know that."

"I know you know it. You just need to accept it."




Across the room, a young man and a boy in his teens were standing at the counter, perusing the coffee selection. It was obvious, to even the casual observer, that they were brothers, both from their manner and their appearance. They shared the same impossibly blond hair. The man was instructing his younger brother to make an order.

"Have whatever you want, okay?" he said, "My treat. Don't even look at the price. Have you ever had a coffee before?"




"Yeah, Dustin. I've had coffee. We're not THAT poor."

"I know that, Beau. Shit, I didn't mean it that way. Some kids don't start drinking it until they're older."

"I'm old enough." He continued to look at the choices on the menu, and finally made a selection. It was true that this would not be his first coffee, but he'd never had any of the fancy coffee drinks that they served here. The price was a little shocking too. He couldn't help but check that. It was force of habit.




As they turned to find a seat, Beau Broke noticed Frances and Edie sitting near the window. He observed them with interest. He liked how all the people in Sim City looked so cool and urban.

"I like his sweater," he said.

"I could get you one. Just say the word."

"I don't know... seems expensive, Dustin."

"Well, yeah, but you're my brother. I could get it for you."




"How can you afford that? You already bought me these new clothes. I mean, I appreciate having something new for school in the fall, but isn't that a lot to spend on me? Where is all the money coming from?"

"There's plenty of money to be made here in the city, Beau. I have my ways. I've been working hard, you know, to make my fair share." He noticed that Beau was still glancing over at the man with the sweater.

"That guy's a Worthington, you know. Richest family in the city. She's one too, by the looks of it."

"They're Worthingtons?" His eyes widened. "How do you know that?"




"I'm pretty sure they are. They have a certain look to them. You can't miss it, once you know what to look for. That inky black hair and the air of superiority."

Beau looked over to where Frances and Edie sat, deep in conversation. Frances was nodding and smiling, while Edie told a story with an animated flourish of her hands. They seemed happy. Was it the money that made it so? Maybe money couldn't buy happiness, but surely, it couldn't hurt. He would have what they had, one day. He wouldn't rest until he did. Dustin Broke saw the look on his brother's face.




"We'll get there. Don't have any doubts. Hard work and determination, Beau. That's what gets you ahead in life."

"Well, If there is anything I can do to make something of myself, I will, Dustin. We need to really buckle down and pull ourselves out of the gutter, so that we can look after Mom in her old age."

"She'll be looked after, don't you worry," Dustin said, "You're going to go to college and get make use of that brilliant mind of yours. I've been saving up for it, so you'll have no worries. Any college you want, Beau. Even the Academie. Just say the word... and then you can go on to do wonderful things."




"Thanks, Dustin." Beau smiled. His brother was so good to him. The clothes and the trip into the city were one thing, but to pay for him to go to college was more than he had ever hoped for.

"Lucy's going to LFT, right?" Dustin asked.

"Yeah. She thought it would be cool to get away, and they have excellent arts programs. I'm not sure about the desert thing, but it would be nice have Lucy around."

"Well, wherever you go, I'm sure you'll excel. You've always done so well in school. You'll graduate with honours and get a good job. We'll put the Worthingtons to shame, believe me."




"Shhh. They'll hear you."

"Like I give a shit if Mr. Fancy Pants hears me."




"Well, there's no need to be nasty about it, alright?" If anything, Beau thought it would be a good idea to befriend those people with wealth and power, rather than making enemies of them.

"Yeah, you're right. I'm just excited."

They walked towards a table, and Beau changed the subject.




"Have you seen Angela lately?"

"No. She's so busy with school and the show, she doesn't have much time for me anymore. It might be different if I had gone to Sim State with them, like Dirk did."




Beau simply nodded. He felt bad for Dustin, who hadn't been able to afford university, but also grateful that he was seeing to it that Beau himself would have the opportunities that he did not.

As for the Angela thing, he knew that it bothered Dustin a lot more than he let on, but he didn't want to bring that up. There were a lot of temptations out there for an actor, especially one who was becoming as well known as Angela and Lilith were. Beau didn't know Angela all that well, but he doubted that his brother was always the first thing on her mind.




"It doesn't matter," Dustin said, as if reading Beau's mind. He smiled with his typically wry grin. "I get by just fine on my own out here. Coming to Sim City was the best decision I ever made. Gordon was kind enough to get me set up with a nice apartment, in a decent neighbourhood, and I had a job in no time. You could probably do the same, quite easily. The job market is great here."

"Unlike Pleasantview," Beau said.

"Yeah, it's a dead retirement village. All shallow rich people, or those who hope to make a buck off of them. And then there's the trailer park where we live, which is swept under the rug. They don't put that on the tourism maps, do they? No big surprise there."




"No. Not a surprise at all. If you were trying to develop tourism, you'd do the same."

"Why would anyone want to visit Pleasantview, anyway?"

"I don't know? The pleasant view?" Beau smiled, hoping that Dustin appreciated the joke.




"Yeah, 'Come to Pleasantview - Where every view is a pleasant one'." He quoted the newest ad campaign. "They're lucky that the ugliness is invisible to the naked eye. The people are attractive enough too, but they have some ugly souls." Beau thought that Dustin might be judging them all a little harshly, but there was some truth to it. It wasn't as idyllic as the ad would have you believe.

"Well, the tourism is a good thing, anyway." Beau attempted to lighten the tone of the conversation. "It will create more jobs for people who desperately need them. The show is what draws them, though, not the view. People want to see the place that inspired Pleasant View."




"Yeah, inspired..." Dustin thought about it. "Right. It's basically non-fiction."

"It's a little exaggerated, Dustin."

"Well, maybe just a little," he said, "but not really that much."




"So, how is the rest of the family?" Frances asked. "I don't call home that much, because, well, you know..."

"Oh, I know," Edie smiled, "I have to force myself to get the nerve up to make the calls too."

"Is Lillian still seeing that same guy?"




"Yeah... Armando Cox. I'm sure you've heard of him, right?"

"He's an athlete, right? Some kind of a big deal?"

"Yeah, he plays soccer. Or football, as they call it in Veronaville."




"You're still on that kick?"

"I get it from Val. Now I'm all Verona-fied."

"Didn't she move to Sim City as a child? It's not like she grew up there."

"Yeah, but she has roots there. That's what matters, Frances."

He rolled his eyes. "People will cling to any little thing."




"Like you - we - can talk."

"I don't go around tell people that I'm a Worthington, Edie! God. If anything, I avoid the subject at all costs. People look at you differently. They judge you... want a piece of you."

"If you're trying to hide it, you're doing a piss poor job, Frances. With your on-campus house and your fancy clothes. If you really wanted to blend in, you'd try the dorms, and go to class in your pajamas. Your cheap, tacky pajamas."

"Well, maybe I don't want to blend in THAT much."

"Face it. You're just a snob. Don't pretend that you arent."




"I'm not that bad."

"You're a spoiled, snobby, little rich kid. No wonder you don't have any friends."

"I have friends!"




"You have 'friend'."

"Yeah, and even that..."

"It'll be okay, Frances. Try not to obsess about it."

"Who, me? Obsess? Never!" Frances sighed. "Anyway, back to Lillian. She's really thrilled about her latest find?"




"Oh, yeah. If you thought she was unbearable before, you haven't heard anything yet." Edie rolled her eyes. "This guy is a BIG effin' deal, Frances."

"Has she procured a ring from him yet?"

"Not yet, but I would say she's fast-tracking this one. He's the closest one yet to her idea of the perfect man. He's just as into all that fame and notoriety crap as she is. And he's rich, successful, and hot. If you're into that athletic manly sort of thing..." She winked at him.

"Yes, I've seen him on TV. Not bad." He was no Tank, but Frances probably wouldn't kick him out of bed, if he was ever presented with that highly improbable situation.

"Well, that's everything Lillian goes for right there."

"Indeed," Frances said.




Frances thought about his oldest sister. She was frightening. He avoided situations where he would have to be in the same room with her for very long. She never thought anything that she didn't immediately say, and her every thought was a critical one. Or a loud, snobby opinion. Or gossip.

She had nothing but contempt for Frances, the heir to the family fortune. Whenever they were in the same room, she wasted no time in bringing up a variety of reasons why he was unsuitable for the role, despite his ownership of the precious Y chromosome. As the firstborn, she thought that she should inherit it all.

"Charlotte has a real whopper on the line now too, if she can manage to reel him in." Edie continued.




"Oh, really? She must be so proud of herself."

"More like relieved. To finally get out of the house with Mom and Dad."

"What difference does that make? Moving from her daddy to her new husband... it's much the same thing, isn't it?"

"Not necessarily, France."

"Let's face it. For Charlotte, it will be. She's not exactly working with a very progressive outlook on life."

"Yes, that's very true. You're right."

"So who's the lucky man who gets to court her for our money?"




"You're not going to believe this..."

"Do tell."

"She been dating Malcolm Landgraab the fourth."

"She landed Landgraab?!" Frances couldn't conceal his shock.




"Well, not landed, but I think she's well on her way."

"Wow. He's in high demand."

"Extremely high," Edie said, "I say, good for Char. She must be doing something right. If you're into that sort of thing."




They shared a smirk, since neither of them was into that sort of thing at all. Edie had her obvious reasons, and Frances just thought he was uglier than sin.




"So 'the rules' work? Who knew?" He shrugged.

"Just imagine it, Frances. That could be you. Out there, auditioning women for the role of wife, just like Landgraab. The feeding frenzy will be intense."

"Don't remind me."

"At least you're just 'the third', and not the 'the fourth', like Landgraab is."

"As if that will matter."




"You're right. It'll be socialites and gold diggers, as far as the eye can see."

"I will have to kill myself," Frances declared.

"God, Frances. Don't be so dramatic!"

"You're right. I could just refuse the 'throne', but it's pretty much take it or leave it. I have no choice."

"Well, you know what I think."

"Yes, I know."




"I want you to be happy."

"But there's Mom too..."

"Yeah, That's true."

They paused to think about the situation with their mother.




Frances didn't want to do anything that might set her off and send her back to her old behaviour. She had made some excellent progress, but they knew that she still struggled with it, even after her last stint in rehab. Frances didn't want to be the reason for her to spiral out of control again. If he told them all the truth, he had no doubt that it would happen. His parents surely would not throw him some ritzy "coming out" party.

"I've been thinking of changing my major," he said. That, in itself, was a bit of a bold move.

"Really..." A smile spread across her face.

"Good for you, Frances."






"I think that's enough for today, Bella."




Pascal had just finished his weekly session with Bella. "We've made a lot of progress. How do you feel about it?"

"Oh, pretty good, Mr. Curious. I think the helmet has been helping a lot. Those memories are getting more and more detailed. At first, I thought they were just dreams."

"You're making excellent progress. Be sure to let me know immediately if you remember anything more current." Bella's memories had all been childhood memories so far. This wasn't very helpful in their quest to determine where she had come from.




So far, they had very little information to work with. Pascal didn't even know her full name. He wondered if Bella was even her real name. Only time would tell, as her memories returned. So far, his invention seemed to be doing exactly what he had designed it to.

Pascal wondered. If his invention had been effective in retrieving memories, could it be modified to block them as well? Perhaps it could be used to block unwanted thoughts, and even dreams?




It might be just what Nervous Subject needed. He had mentioned that his nightmares were bothering him, and that they always had, for as long as he could remember. When pressed for details, Nervous wouldn't tell him what the dreams were about, and Pascal respected his privacy. He knew it would be better for Nervous to talk about them, and share some of the burden of it all, but he obviously wasn't ready to do that. Even if he just wrote it down, it might help. Pascal made a mental note to suggest it.




Pascal frowned, as he thought of the obvious mental trauma that the boy must have gone through to end up so shaken. It wasn't normal to have that many nightmares. And then, there were also those voices to consider.

Pascal pushed those thoughts aside for know, and turned his attention back to Bella.




Pascal was determined to unravel this mystery. There was a logical explanation for everything.

There had been one detail from her memories that seemed like it might set them on the right path: a bright light. She kept recalling a very bright light. Pascal was guessing that this might indicate a near-death experience, and possibly a head trauma that had caused her memory loss, but her medical reports didn't reflect any head injury. It just didn't fit together. He was hoping that more details would surface eventually. He was confident that they would. As he had said, they had been making excellent progress.

"I'll see you next week, Bella. Keep doing those exercises, and wear the noodlesoother. You're doing great."

"Okay, Pascal."

"Oh, I'm sorry. Am I early?" Kristen Loste stepped onto the roof. She was there for her own appointment with Pascal.




"No. It's okay, Kristen. We ran over."

"Okay. Well, that's good." Kristen had come a long way since her run in with the Beakers. While her memories remained elusive, her confidence was returning. "Hello, Bella."

"Hello, Kristen. Nice day, isn't it?"

"Yes, very nice. Almost too nice. I'm sweating like a pig after the walk up the hill." Bella made a disgusted face, but then hid it with a smile. A lady shouldn't sweat, she thought. Or, at least, they shouldn't admit to it like that.

"Yeah, it is pretty hot." She turned to walk away. "Have a nice day now!"

"I'll see you next week, Bella." Pascal said.




"So how are you feeling, Kristen?"

"Oh, quite well, Pascal." She smiled, which always brought out the best in her. "I'm in a much better space now, mentally. I think I've come to accept it. It's not like I can do anything about it."

"Well, we'll do what we can."

"I know. But for now, as it is, I think I can deal with it."

Pascal was happy to hear this. "So I hear than Erin moved out."

"Yeah, she was happy to move back to her home. We haven't heard much from her, so I guess she's busy getting the place in order." She paused, then added. "Our house is a lot more peaceful now that she isn't there to bicker with Chloe all day." Pascal stifled a laugh.




"How is Chloe? And Lola? I've been so busy lately. I really should stay in touch better than I have been."

"They're both busy with work, doing their thing. You know Lola - she never stops. And Chloe is really involved with the restaurant now."

"Yes, that's right. How exciting for her."

"Yeah, well, she's not excited about how it's helping her to pack on the pounds, but I think she carries it well."

"Chloe can carry off anything."

"And nobody trusts a skinny chef, right?"

"That's what they say." Pascal gestured to the noodlesoother. "Well, let's get started here, shall we, Kristen? We're going to waste the day." Kristen nodded, and picked up the helmet.




Downstairs, Vidcund was in the middle of his daily toddler training session. He believed that vigorous study habits were the only way to achieve self-improvement, and this applied to babies as well as adults.




It was hard, tiring work, but it was all worth it when they reached a new milestone, and when they looked up at him with their little smiling faces. Galaxy had a smile that could melt the coldest of hearts.




Vidcund thought they were advancing quite well in their studies, even when they were left to their own devices. Orion was quite naturally drawn to musical activities, and he was already more talented in that area than Vidcund would ever be.




Vidcund thought that Orion was really quite a bit like Lazlo. Not in appearance, obviously, but he reminded him of his youngest brother in many ways. That always was a little upsetting, since they hadn't been seeing much of Lazlo at all. A visit here and there, but that was it, and it was always without Crystal Vu.

Vidcund disliked Crystal. It wasn't a secret.




It was true that she was a beautiful girl, on the outside, at least. He had been excited when she first moved in, but Vidcund had been quickly put off by everything else about her. There was just something about her. He didn't want Lazlo to get hurt, and he wasn't sure that she was right for him.




For starters, there was the physical transformation. She cleaned Lazlo up to better suit her own aesthetics. He looked good, but it just didn't seem like Lazlo anymore.




Crystal had given herself a similar makeover. It was sleek, sophisticated, and even a little dangerous. Something about it really unsettled Vidcund. It was just a haircut, but when someone had as much hair as Crystal did, that was quite a significant change. It was all part of her plans to climb her way into the upper crust of sim society.




Lazlo was even more mesmerized by her after that. He was completely under her spell.




Vidcund could deal with it, as long as his brother was happy, and, at first, he really was. Lazlo was head over heels for Crystal, and they did seem to have a lot of fun together. Slowly, though, that seemed to change. Crystal wasn't the same after Vidcund's twins were born, and she convinced Lazlo to move out soon after.

Now, they saw less and less of Lazlo all of the time. Pascal insisted that they had to respect Lazlo's decisions, that he was a grown man and could make up his own mind, but Vidcund wasn't happy with that. Maybe Lazlo couldn't see it. Maybe he needed someone to point out that he wasn't the same.




During a recent conversation, Lazlo had told Vidcund that he had attended a very elegant party in Bluewater Village, with a bunch of high society types. Their host, Malcolm Landgraab, was known for his classy dinner parties, and wild all-night events at his nightclub, Club Dante. Vidcund had heard of him, just as anyone would have, but he really didn't care much about that sort of thing, and he couldn't imagine that Lazlo did either. Still, he had asked questions and responded positively to Lazlo's story, even though it wasn't how he really felt.

"So, what did you wear to this thing?" Vidcund had asked him. "Your purple hippy tee shirt?" Vidcund had always thought that shirt was tacky, and he gave Lazlo a hard time about its cheerful interlocking sun and moon design.

"A suit."

"YOU wore a suit?"

"Yeah, Vid. I wore a suit. Is that so strange?"




"It's... different."

"Well, this was a different sort of event." Lazlo sounded a little defensive. "I had to look my best."

Vidcund thought, but didn't say, that it must have been Crystal's idea of what was "Lazlo's best", and it had nothing to do with his brother. He considered how he might safely bring up the topic. "So did Crystal help you pick one out?"

"No. I did it all by myself, like a big boy." Again, Vidcund wasn't sure if he had offended Lazlo, but then he laughed, which revealed that it was fine. "I'm not sure I really did a great job of it. I mean, it looked pretty cool to me. The tie was colourful, and the suit fit well enough, but I think that Crystal thought it was a bit goofy. I have no idea what's cool. Trends go right over my head."

"Plenty of things go over your head, Lazlo."

"Ha ha ha. So very funny. You're not exactly a fashion guru yourself, Vid."

"True enough."




"So, did you have fun?" Vidcund asked, trying to stay positive.

"Yeah... it was a good time."

Vidcund was not convinced. He couldn't imagine Lazlo happy in such a situation. Lazlo wanted to sit around and eat pizza, playing video games all evening. That was his idea of a great time. Crystal wasn't into that sort of thing at all. How were they a good match? She was attractive. There was no denying that. She was gorgeous, and she could probably have any man she wanted. He should probably be happy for Lazlo, having found himself such a stunning woman, but were looks really everything?




There was just something about Crystal that sent up warning flags for Vidcund, and he couldn't articulate exactly what it was. He pondered it over as he went about making himself a lunch, until he was interrupted by the ringing of the phone.

Damn telemarketers again, Vidcund thought. They always call you when you're getting something to eat, without fail.




"Hello?" he barked.






"Yes. It's me."




"... Fine."




"I heard about... everything."




"Tonight? I don't know..."




"Okay."




Vidcund slowly hung up the phone, and stood there, stunned, until Pascal entered the room.

"Who was that?"

"Nobody. Stupid telemarketers again."

"Really..."

"Yeah. I'm going to stop answering the damn thing altogether soon."




"Well, that's not really much of a solution, is it, Vidcund? Someone important might call." Pascal glanced at the clock to check the time. "I'm going to have to go out for a while, okay?"

"Where are you going?"

"Nowhere. Just the office to do some paperwork. The usual. I won't be late."




"Sure." Vidcund paused, thinking it over. Pascal's behaviour had been a little unusual lately, and with the mysterious death of Nervous Subject, he had reason to worry about him. Pascal probably needed to work extra hours to keep his mind distracted, but Vidcund still kept an eye on his moods. He seemed fine, but you never knew. "Well, be back by dark, okay? I was going to head into the office myself later."

"No problem. I'll be here."




Pascal headed out the door, but instead of heading to work, he walked down the hill to the Specter Estate.




Nervous would be expecting him by now.








 

Date: 2008-04-07 01:20 am (UTC)
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Uhm.....just FYI, there are two cuts. You might wanna check the html. :)

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Yeah, I caught that. Just a cut/paste issue. I always check it after I post it to fix whatever random issues I manage to cause like that. At least I don't have the white space of doom. *snicker*


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BEAU AND DUSTIN :DDDD *goes back to reading*

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Heheh. The crossovers are coming... :P

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Grr, man. I'm really starting to hate Crystal as portrayed in your story. Poor Lazlo, awestruck by a social climber and forced to change for her purposes. It makes me even happier now knowing that my PSV Lazlo is happily married to a woman who adores him and his wacky family. He can take their girl out to collect bugs and hike while his son makes a shitload of pottery and his wife plays video games all day in her underwear.

No, really. I have no clue why my self-sim won't keep her damned clothes on. She greets the mailman in her 'roos. It's both hilarious and disturbing... since I'd do the same if I had my way.

Date: 2008-04-07 02:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Well, Crystal has her priorities. I'm not sure if that makes her hate-worthy in itself, but Vidcund's suspicions about their relationship may be right. We'll have to wait and see. We don't know if Lazlo is unhappy. He might be perfectly fine.

I'm glad your Lazlo is doing so well. :)


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Date: 2008-04-07 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dothesmustle.livejournal.com
Oh, it was fun to Frances again, we see a little bit more of his snobby side here. It so sad to see him so hung up over Tank. Poor thing, hopefully he'll find someone soon.

Yes! The crossovers! The Brokes are one of my favorite Pleasantview families, I think it's more or less because they're the only family(along with Goths) that isn't do anything so...mean spirited. They're just a genuinely nice family, in my eyes atleast. Beau is a fortune sim?

The Curious brothers hide a lot from eachother, don't they? It was just one lie after another with those three.

It's Circe on the phone isn't? WHY MUST VIDCUND DO THIS? He sees something sketchy in Crystal, but he can't see the obvious evil in CIRCE? She's named after a Greek god that turned people into animals!

Malcolm Landgraab IV always reminded me of Garfield. Why? I never knew. :P

Also just a little question: Have you ever seen anyone congratulate Bella on an engagement? My sim has been constantly congratulating her on an engagement that never happened.

Date: 2008-04-07 03:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Yeah, Frances does show a little more of his snobby side in this chapter. He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, so it shouldn't be much of a surprise that he's like that. Frances has a tendency to obsess over things, so he'll have a hard time letting go of Tank. He's soon going to have to make a move or move on, though.

Crossovers are fun. :D The Bella thing is there already, so why not? And some of these characters work into the plot so well. You're right about Pleasantview. There are a lot of dirty dealings there, or at least they appear to be that way. Some of them, I'm not so sure.

Beau is a fortune sim (I sometimes give him popularity too, with the outgoingness, but it works for fortune too). That makes sense to me, with the poor upbringing, and did you know that many entrepreneurs are missing a father figure? Maybe Beau will go into business.

It's not like Pascal to lie to his family, but with the Nervous situation, he has no choice. They don't know if Nervous will be safe, if anyone knows where he is. Vidcund has another reason to hide the truth...

Is it because Circe is on the line? It might be. And you seem to have realized the irony in Vidcund's reaction to Crystal. (She even has the same haircut as Circe. *snicker*) Maybe he's just hoping that Lazlo won't get sucked into the same trap. Oh, desire can be a terrible thing.

*snort* Garfield? That's different. Is it the shape of his face, maybe? I don't know. Malcolm looks like a lizard-monkey hybrid to me.

No, I haven't seen anyone congratulate Bella on an engagement. Is it something in her memories? I've never noticed that (but I'll keep an eye out for it now).

Date: 2008-04-07 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ricamarcella.livejournal.com
Glad to see new threads enter the story! So we've got Frances' family coming into the foreground more, as well as Crystal. Dustin and Beau Broke enter the scene, perhaps bringing some Pleasantview characters along with them. Are the LFT adventures, the Grunt-Smith tensions plot, the Frances + Tank romance, the Circe-Vali scheme, the Curious' brothers problems, the government and aliens animosity, the mystery of Bella, plots that will they only touch at the ends? Or will they meet at some point?

Poor Lazlo. The more serious he gets with Crystal the deeper the hole gets. I must admit, he looks smashing in the suit. I think he's the best looking of the Curiouses. I'm glad to get some real Strangetown action for once! But despite Vidcund's non-approval of Crystal, why's he about to walk into a similar hole?

Plus, why's Pascal keeping secret the fact that Nervous is alive? Why can't he tell his brothers, at least? Seems he's being awfully secretive.

Date: 2008-04-07 10:00 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Frances has been inching his way to major character for a while now, and he'll be getting a little more of the spotlight. Crystal has a role to play too.

Many of those plots will intersect in some way, since most of them will relate back to one or two key plot points at some point. Others will only relate to each other on a more character-based level, I think. The Worthingtons are a very influential family, so they'll have a role to play in the overall story, but I don't know how much they'll be involved in the alien issue, for example. Though, over time, more people may get dragged into that too. I'm really not fully sure where it will all go yet. (Hopefully, I can make it go somewhere, instead of writing myself into a corner. It'll be fun to try, anyway.)

I think that Lazlo is definitely the best looking Curious. He's my favourite of the brothers, but I do have a soft spot for those sloppy, playful sims. You're right about his involvement with Crystal. After a while, it have been hard to break from those things, even when it's no longer working. Maybe he isn't happy with their lifestyle, but he's probably still very much in love with Crystal, so he's willing to try for her sake. As for Vidcund, you're exactly right, but he's pretty blinded to the problem.

For now, Pascal thinks it's best to keep it a secret from as many people as possible. He has a large family, and a number of them are notorious gossips, so he's afraid that the word might get out if he tells his family. Nervous Subject's whereabouts are unknown to everyone but him, Johnny, Ripp, and Ophelia (and Circe probably assumes correctly). He's just trying to keep Nervous safe, until he's sure that it's okay to let others know. Nobody knows about the whole thing with Olive except Nervous and Circe.

Date: 2008-04-07 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] redqueenofevil.livejournal.com
Wow! All sorts of cameos! I practically squealed when I saw the Brokes though- they're almost the epitome of Sims 2, next to Bella. And I did get excited to see Bella, speaking of her.

I wonder if Frances and Beau will become friends, or does Beau have other things in mind?

I'm very curious as to whom was on the other line for Vidcund. Was it Crystal, since you set up their scenario? Or was it Circe? Either of those women might elicit the response he gave (one a user, the other a heart breaker), after all. Obviously Crystal would be the obvious one, but I can't help but think that it's Circe... I don't know why.

Yay for updates! Can't wait to see the next chapter. :)

Date: 2008-04-07 12:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
I've totally caught the crossover bug. I've been toying with the idea of doing more of this since I first wrote about the Pleasant View soap opera and added Angela and Lilith to Sim City for use in Ripp's dream. I'd have to involve some of the usual suspects in the Bella mystery anyway, so why not? It's a lot of fun to think about how the characters from different hoods might interact.

Well, I've introduced the Brokes in this way for a reason, as you might have guessed. I meant for there to be a contrast between the two families, and I do intend for there to eventually be some interaction between them.

If you don't already know the identity of Vidcund's caller, you'll have to wait and see in the second half. Your assessment of the possibilities is pretty accurate. There aren't a whole lot of other options out there.

Thanks. :)

Date: 2008-04-07 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xel-squirgle-ox.livejournal.com
I keep giggling whenever I see Frances now, since my fat and extremely purple one keeps popping into my head! :P

After this chapter, there's a lot of things I could see happening. I'm kinda upset that Kendall's in the picture now though. I still don't like the girl. Can't wait to see what Frances decides to do after this little talk with Edie.

Oh and yay, the Brokes are in the story now! Seeing them interract with the Worthingtons will be very interesting, since they come from totally contrasting backgrounds.

I actually moved the family (Brandi and John Burb who are now married, and all six kids) to Bluewater village so they can interract with my Strangetownians as well. Didn't know what to do with Dustin since he was perpetually failing as a teen, so he's living with Malcom Landgraab (of all people!) at the moment. Beau, and his two younger twin brothers Samson and Glenn are currently going to college with Buck in my game so you might see them pop up in an entry over at my story as well.



Date: 2008-04-07 05:30 am (UTC)
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My Brandi had twin boys later too. O.O Kinda neat. :D

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Date: 2008-04-07 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 80sfiend.livejournal.com
Oh yay an update! Squee! :D Poor Frances, I always just want to give him a big hug. :( Edie continues to be so cool. :D I'm glad he has her in his life cause I think she'll help him no matter what he decides to do about the inheritance thing. :)

Also, EEEKK!!!! I'm so excited to see Dustin and Beau. :D I absolutely love the Brokes as a family. They're so much fun to play. I married Lillith to Dustin and Angela to Don Lothario in my game. :D But I always love to see how other people characterize them. :D I can't wait to see more of them. (I'm assuming there will be more of them right?)

Tank and Kendall getting to know each other is nice. :D They're cute. :D

I love your characterization of Bella. I've ALWAYS thought she seemed like a bit of a bitch to be honest. So I love that she's coming off as a little snobby at the very least. :D

Lazlo looks really cute without his facial hair eh? :D I did the same thing in my game too. ;) Crystal scares me though. O.O She seems really...cold. I have a feeling she doesn't like aliens and is trying to get him to shut out that part of his life. :\

I like what you're doing with Frances' other sisters too. I love that they all have lives that you develop. :D And I love that all the characters interact with each other in some way...even unknowingly, like being at the same party or whatever. :D It's awesome. :D

Really really love your story, just thought it needed to be said again. :D You are just so awesome at storytelling. :D Totally my fave "show" to read. :D

...still have to make a Jill/Ripp icon. :P

Date: 2008-04-07 01:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
You're always so excited in your comments! I just imagine them being said in this hyperactive voice when I read them. *grin*

You're right. Edie will be there to help Frances with whatever he choices to do, and her apartment is always a landing pad for him, if he messes up and falls into ruin.

It's nice to see so much excitement over the appearance of the Brokes. I had no idea they were quite that popular. I'm usually drawn more to Mortimer, Don Lothario, and Lilith, but I have had a lot of fun playing with Brandi too. The Brokes will definitely be featured again in this story. You know that I wouldn't just throw them in here for no reason. I have plans. ;)

So someone does like the Tank/Kendall situation? I think that Kendall might be good for Tank, at least in some ways. She'll force him out of his shell a little.

I don't know if Bella is a bitch, exactly, but I'd say a little of her wealthy background comes through, even with her memories wiped. She's all class and elegance, that Bella. Oh, and sexual desire. ;)

I think Lazlo is cute like this, but I have to be honest and say that I miss his long hair. I'd like to get him to grow it back at some point. You have a point about Crystal. The brothers suspect that she dislikes aliens too.

I like having a large supporting cast like that, since you never know when you might need to pull someone out of the background for some purpose. It's always fun to think about different connections, like who would be shown at that fancy party with Crystal and Lazlo. We have Ajay, of course, and even Angela Pleasant is there (since what party is complete without a celebrity).

Thank you. I really appreciate you saying so. :) I like how you called it a "show" too. I think the pacing is quite similar to a TV show, at times. I've been really stuck on making chapters just span a single day lately, but I'll have to pick up the pace soon, to move it along a little.

Heheh. Always with the Jill/Ripp, huh?

Date: 2008-04-07 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simfulacts.livejournal.com
YES! An update!

Man, I have yet to meet anyone who likes Crystal. :D

Looking forward to more!

Date: 2008-04-07 01:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Thanks! It does seem like Crystal is universally disliked, or at least ignored. I don't personally dislike her, but I do see problems with the compatibility between her and Lazlo.

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Date: 2008-04-07 09:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindyanne1.livejournal.com
Aw, poor Francis! But at least he's making some strides. I just love Edie. She totally rocks!

Malcolm makes a logical match for Lillian, but I wonder how much of it is logic and how much is love?

Ooooh... Broke brothers!!! ((drools)) No I don't normally play Pleasantview (okay never, lol) but I can certainly enjoy the Brokes! Can't wait to see what more they have for us!

Pascal as psychotherapist. (grins) I can *so* see it! And Vid, you have every right to be wary of Crystal. Warn Lazlo! Get him away from her soon!!!!! She made Lazlo wear a suit for goodness' sakes!! Aaaaah!!!!!

Hee hee hee

Vid's alien spawn are cuties.

Thank you for the update! It was wonderful as always!!

Date: 2008-04-07 01:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindyanne1.livejournal.com
Okay now that I don't have a baby in my arms I can type with two hands, lol! I'm also wondering who was on the phone with dear Vid. ((shakes head)) Whether it was Circe or Crystal, it looks like the poor guy's not thinking with his brain!

Well, do men ever? ((snorts))

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Date: 2008-04-07 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madame-ugly.livejournal.com
I love when siblings call each other by their full names. That's always funny. And Jules as a middle name is awesome (such a pretentious sounding name).

And it's a good thing I was sitting down. *snicker* An update with NO Ripp/Johnny/Ophelia? I almost fainted dead away! (teasing)

This is what I've been waiting for, a whole update with other cast members. I love updates that jump around and fill in all the little gaps.

Pssst, your crossover is showing! *snicker* I like it. And you know my filthy, filthy mind immediately made Beau attracted to Frances. It was just a momentary flash, but it happened. I can't deny it. And Dustin has a very Peculiar Mortimer Goth look to him. At first I thought it was him ("MORT! What are you doing? You have cowplants to tend!") (oh, is Dustin a criminal? I'm getting that vibe)

I love seeing Frances's family told through gossip. It seems so appropriate. And Malcolm isn't a very attractive man. That monkey lip and eye bags? He's not HIDEOUS, but there is definitely better out there.

Like Lazlo Curious. Mmm, mmm, mmm! While I don't agree with Crytal's motives, she does have a way with the makeover scissors. And Lazlo needs to stop with the self-depricating humor. He picked out a lovely suit (pin striped suits, mmm).

Now, if you would, I need a moment with Vidcund Curious. *takes Vidcund aside* "Vid. Are you really so blind? You're getting bad vibes from Crystal but you accept an invite from CIRCE BEAKER. Circe FUCKING Beaker? Are you MAD?! Do I have to get Edie to drum some sense into your head after she's done with Frances?" *shakes head* "What am I going to do with you? Really?" *sighs*

Date: 2008-04-07 02:48 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
I'm a big fan of that too, and it's something that the baby of the family seems to get stuck with most of the time. Frances has that J. just sitting there, waiting for something like this. Jules is nice and pretentious, yes, and has French orgins, and is also another unisex name. All good reasons to be used on Frances.

Look, ma'am! No J/R/O! You knew I could do it, didn't you? *snicker* See, I have SOME willpower. They briefly bullied their way into the second half, though. Attention whores, I tell you.

I was really due for a gap-filler like this. It was a nice opportunity to introduce some new faces too. (Oops. My crossover slipped out? How embarrassing. *snicker*)

Well, Beau DID like the sweater that Frances was wearing, so go ahead and read into that however you like. *snicker* You're just hungry for a new Frances love interest, aren't you?

Yeah, Dustin is rocking the Peculiar Morti 'do. I think it suits him. I think he's quite fetching with it. You're getting the right vibe about his job. I wasn't trying to hide it, really, just not come right out and say so. He starts out that way in Pleasantview, and his connections with this Gordon King fellow (who is a burglar in P'view) helped him to secure a job in the big city. A fairly lucrative job that requires little experience. Hmmm...

I like the idea of catching up on the family gossip. I end up using that device a lot, but it's so convenient.

Malcolm is, as they say around here, "not too god love". Don't ask me to fully explain the expression, since I'm not originally from this town, but it roughly translates to mean "he's ugly". *snicker* (The expression is a bit of a French/English hybrid thing, I think.) I find him weirdly monkey-like and reptilian at the same time. He's got a distinctive look, no doubt, and I can't wait to see what the children might end up like. I'm new to the Langraab breeding game, but I've heard nothing but horrow stories. At least Charlotte also has a short little face.

Yeah, Lazlo is yummy. I like his suit too, but I'd say that Crystal didn't think it was classy enough. Not like stylin' Ajay there. *snicker*

I'm glad you had that little chat with Vidcund. *snicker* So like a mother, or wife, you are. Vidcund knows that there's something he doesn't like about Crystal... but he can't QUITE put his finger on it, and then the phone rings. When will he clue in?

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Date: 2008-04-07 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indigoleo.livejournal.com
Alas, poor Frances. Give it up, man, Tank is not into you. Much as they would look good together I can't see it happening. I think Edie may have to hit him over the head with the stick of reason. Either that or smack him with the fish of truth. Something.

Heh, I saw the name "Dustin" and hadn't even scrolled down far enough to read the rest and I was thinking Broke? And that's Beau? Hmm...quite nice. I've played with them a little but never long enough to get them to adulthood. Although I do like the family. Of all the families in Pleasentview I think I liked the Brokes the best.

Ah, Malcom Landgrabb. What can I say that hasn't already been said about him. Anybody that marries him will be marrying him for his money, not his looks! I've seen pictures of some of his offspring before. They're almost as scary as Loki's.

Oh, my poor Lazlo! You cleaned him all up! Made him look respectable! Made him Shave! Okay, that was Crystal but still! O.O What's happened to my loveable slob who likes to watch TV all the time and would probably be swilling beer if they had it in the game?
I have to say I never liked Crystal too much either. When I restarted Strangetown a 2nd time I tried getting them together since, story-wise they're sort of supposed to be. She was just too mean. In fact, they got into enough of an argument with each other that Lazlo no longer had a crush on her. This last time when I started up I didn't even bother. The only thing she is good for in my game is following my other sims home from work and then proceeding to play pranks on them and being generally mean.

Vidcund may be right about Lazlo but he needs to open his own eyes, as well (that stick of reason will be broke by the time you get through hitting everybody with it that needs it). Lazlo may love Crystal but I can't really believe he's liking all these changes she's making to him. Time will tell, I guess.
When you do a continuation of this part maybe you could title it, "Everybody Gets a Clue." :)

Date: 2008-04-07 06:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Time for Frances to let it go, maybe? Any normal person might have have given up long ago, but Frances is an eternal optimist. I guess he's invested so much into it at this point, that it's almost impossibly to just drop it.

The fish of truth! :D That might work. *snicker*

I've enjoyed playing with the Brokes in the past, and I think they make interesting characters, and I think they'll find a suitable place in this story.

Yes, Malcolm does have a bit of reputation, doesn't he? He's not known for his looks. I used to get a kick out of reading some of the threads about him on the official site. People were always complaining about how ugly the children were, as if it came as a surprise, but I was just left wondering if they actually LOOKED at Malcolm before they started breeding with him. He has some seriously powerful eyebrows (and you just know that they're genetically dominant).

I know. He doesn't seem like Lazlo anymore, does he? That's the whole problem for Vidcund too. It doesn't seem like his brother, so how can that be good? Crystal is serious and grouchy, but she's hardly unique in Strangetown - plenty of people are! Lazlo is not very serious, however. At all.

Do you really think everyone will get a clue by part 2? *snicker* The clues might be coming, but not quite that soon for most. Some may be very resistant to getting a clue, in fact.

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This is great stuff

Date: 2008-04-07 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blissfulrain47.livejournal.com
I have to say this is a great story. I had to read all of it which took me two days to do. Well here's my two cents on everything.

I love Frances. I really hope everything works out for him. I really think he should put a move on with dealing with the Tank situation. I'd hate to see Frances broken hearted but I really don't think Tank is in any way, shape, or form gay. I just hope he can find the right guy.

I love the Brokes especially Dustin. Him and Angela are two of my favorite PleasantView sims. I really can't wait to see what you have in store for them with this story. Is it me or does Beau remind anyone else of Buck even just a little?

Oh boy! The Curious bros. seem to really have their hands full. Alien kids, mysterious phone calls (I think I know who called but I might be wrong),side projects, bad choices in women(or so it seems for now), and keeping things from each other. They really are in it deep. I must say though that this is an interesting view on Crystal. I haven't had the opportunity to play that much with Crystal but she never seemed to be that way to me. I like it though. It brings more conflict.

On a lighter note I have to tell you that I love Mint. She cracks me up. She is a far cry from Pascal's daughter in my game.

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Date: 2008-04-07 07:13 pm (UTC)
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what's the best way to track your story? I'm new to live-journal and I'm not sure how I could do that.

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Date: 2008-04-07 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hcraig480.livejournal.com
I love that you introduced the Broke brothers. I absolutely love them. They're my favorite family.

Date: 2008-04-07 10:24 pm (UTC)
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I'm glad you approve. It seems like they're a favourite of many. I think they're quite interesting, and they should make a nice addition to the mix of characters.

Date: 2008-04-07 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simgarooop.livejournal.com

Yay! Crossovers! (And Yay! I finally have time to catch up with this new update!)

Poor Frances, torn between what he really wants (but can't have), his family's expectations (plus the deal with his Mom) and his personality issues. Poor, poor guy. I really think it's unlikely that Tank might return his feelings (with or without Kendra in the picture), though. His sister is awesome, though, so it's nice that he's got at least someone who'll listen to his problems.

And I giggled when I saw the Broke brothers in action! ;P. My, my... it seems like Dustin is still in "the dark side", and his friendship with old Gordon the burglar is still going strong. I can see him stealing some money to buy clothes for his brothers and mom (the sweetheart!) but to send Beau to College? Does that mean he's into something big? I hope it won't backfire.

I see that Beau might choose another aproach to financial success, though. Sort of like Crystal Vu, BTW. At first I thought he was a popularity Sim, but he's fortune, right? Ummm... I wonder what'll happen if he goes to College? And Lucy is going too?! This is getting interesting!

And I just can't wait for the moment Ripp will get to meet Angela Pleasant :P. You just know that has to happen sometime! I still laugh when I remember his stupid dreams about the twins :D.

I don't "hate" Crystal. I've never interacted much with her, though. And by the way, there are a LOT of mean townies at Strangetown, like Kendall and ReneƩ Andrews. But it seems she's being a bit selfish (perhaps she hasn't realized it) by not letting Lazlo be just... himself.

What worries me is the trust issues between the Curious brothers. For such a close family, they seem to keep a lot things from each other. From Pascal's relationship with Nervous to the way Lazlo has distanced from his brothers. And, of course, Vidcund's secret phonecall. I think it might be *that* evil scientist who's plotting something big right now :S (and I still worry about her little son), but who knows at this point!

Awesome as always :)

Date: 2008-04-08 02:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Crossovers are so much fun... but I don't need to tell you that, do I? You've had a lot of fun with the Maxis hoods. :)

Frances is really in a tight spot with his family. Even without Tank, he's probably going to have to come out to them eventually, unless he decides to fake it and marry a woman (but I can't see Edie standing by and letting him do that). It's not hard to see that Tank is a bit of a long shot, but Frances needs to at least come clean about his orientation to Tank. If he considers him a friend, he should be open about it, and it would be good for Frances to be open about it in some parts of his life.

I'm sticking to the script for Dustin. I figured, with the money problems and the young children to care for, Brandi wasn't able to deal with Dustin's trouble with the law, and they really did need the money. Dustin's essentially a decent guy, though, and he's just doing what he can for his family. He's just going about it in a less than ideal way, and moving up in his chosen career.

Beau is more likely to start his own business, and act out a Horatio Alger rags to riches story. I usually give him either popularity or fortune as an aspiration, but fortune seemed to make the most sense, given his background. His outgoing personality will help him in the business world. Now I just need to decide what sort of business he'll start. It'll be something relevant to the story, of course.

I have no doubt that Ripp will cross paths with one (or both) of the Pleasant twins at some point, even if it's just a throwaway gag. I have something in mind for further down the road too. If Ripp's band ever makes it big, there's a pretty good chance they'll cross paths.

That's how I feel about Crystal too. I suppose she doesn't push my emotions in either direction, and she's certainly not the only mean sim in Strangetown. The thing with Lazlo might be coming from his side too, and maybe it's his decision to change, like Pascal said. he might think that she's worth changing for.

The Curious brothers do have a lot of secrets right now, but they're a very close family, so I have no doubt that they'll eventually come out into the open. (And you're on the right track with the phone call.)

Thank you. :)

Date: 2008-04-07 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] treesahquiche.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness! The Brokes! That certainly makes things more interesting. And what's this about Vidcund's mysterious phone call and not knowing about Nervous? Your Strangetown series is definitely the most awesome Sim story out there. I can't wait for the next update!

Date: 2008-04-08 03:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com
Thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoy it. You'll learn more about Vidcund's mysterious phone call in the second part. The Brokes will work their way into the story over time. It will be fun to see how they mesh with the Strangetown cast.

Date: 2008-04-08 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smjoshsims.livejournal.com
I love Francis. Heis adorable! YAY!
Brokes! I love the Brokes, they are so awesome. I love their characterization, you write everything so well. I really like Edie as well. I feel like I get here late, so everything that needs to be said has been said, I just like letting you know I enjoy your stories. :D

Date: 2008-04-08 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] franwi.livejournal.com
I ogled shirtless Tank. That's so sad. ;) At the coffee shop when you introduced the new characters, I was all Cute brothers! OMG, Dustin and Beau! *falls off couch* Those two have really nice profiles. They look a bit odd full on, but in profile - yum. I love how you depicted their situation with Dustin cut off from Angela and working for/with Gordon King, doing who knows what, still trying to make it big. And Beau heading off to college soon, thanks to Dustin's efforts. Are you avoiding the 3rd brother? If not, what is his name? (You probably already answered this in another reply, but everything's collapsed and I'm too lazy to search, lol.)

I sympathized with Frances' dilemma. I seriously want him with Tank, though, even if he's just crushing. You'd really have to sell me on pairing him with anyone else.

You've got so many characters going on now, I love it. It's making me wish simming was your full time job. You already update so often with such great stuff, but I could read this series every day, I'm addicted.

I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next freshman class. And that last line of this update... well, my mind is in the gutter, but unfortunately I don't think this is a booty call Pascal's making at the Specter Estate. ;)

Date: 2008-04-13 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofieamalien.livejournal.com
Hey! Sorry I haven't commented for a while. I've been so busy after comming home from USA - I got a fulltime job now and when I come home, I usually spend a lot of the time, just simming and online chatting.

But I have been keeping up with the story and I still LOVE it!! I also like all the little extra posts; drabbles, pics from other households etc. It's really nice.

Take Care!

Sofie

Date: 2008-09-03 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catladymeow.livejournal.com
I thought the Broke boys all had dark hair, guess I did not recall correctly. That threw me, but I do love seeing them and hope they get more play. Is Beau gonna be going to college with Buck?
Can't wait to get to the next entry.

Date: 2009-01-19 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pnkpnthr334.livejournal.com
Oooh Pleasantview cross-over!!!

So many secrets between the Curious brothers! I am not liking Crystal Vu, not one bit.

Date: 2009-03-02 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovelythingsdie.livejournal.com
Yay, the Broke boys >.

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