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Warnings: language, suggestion of sexual situations, suggestion of alien probings, and extreme cuteness in the form of an alien toddler.
Chapter Thirty-Three
Stella had been gone for only five minutes before Jayne picked up the phone.
She dialed the number and waited as the rings went in.
"Hello?" a voice asked.
"Yeah, hi," she said, "Can I speak to Johnny, please?"
"YOU?! What the hell do YOU want with him?!"
"Relax. I just need to speak to him, okay?"
"No! I will NOT relax! You have some fucking nerve! What makes you think I'm going to let you speak to him, after what you did to him?"
"So you're his gatekeeper now?"
"Damn right I am!"
Jayne let out a sigh. "Look, I heard about his father..."
"Yeah. AND?!"
"And I need to speak to him."
"Well, you should have thought about that before you had him abducted!"
"Ripp... be reasonable."
"I AM being reasonable! Look, Johnny's in a lot of pain right now, okay?" He paused for a moment to swallow. "And this is the last thing he needs."
"Look, I know. I get it. You don't have any reason to trust me, but I swear I have only good intentions this time. Well, I had good intentions to first time too, not that I expect—"
"Are you fucking KIDDING me?! You abducted him! Was he supposed to LIKE that?"
"Look, I don't expect you to understand, but trust me... he's going to want to talk to me."
"No..."
"His father's illness changes everything. This is serious, you know. With the virus here, on this planet, he's going to want to give this whole thing more thought.
"No... he doesn't. He doesn't want that."
"How do you know that? Are you him?"
"Well..." Ripp paused. The truth was he feared exactly what Jayne was suggesting, that this did change things for Johnny, but he didn't want to believe that.
"Look, I'm sorry, okay?" Jayne continued. "I don't know what else to say. But I do need to speak to him. This is really serious. I mean, Stella's already fled for her life..."
"What?!"
"She's gone. She's leaving the planet."
"Already?!"
"Well, yeah! What do you expect? She's not going to wait around to catch it! Her life is in danger! Of course she's left already! She just left. They're picking her up over at the far end of campus."
There was silence on the other end of the line.
"Ripp?"
Nothing.
"RIPP?!"
There was nothing but dead air. He'd left without even hanging up the phone.
"Oh, for..." she muttered to herself as she slammed down the receiver. "Idiot!" Now she couldn't even call back.
She paused a moment, then tried Johnny's cell. Nothing. She received a message telling her he was outside the service area.
That cleared that up, at least. It seemed like she need not have bothered with Ripp anyway. Johnny had obviously already gone back to Strangetown.
Jayne paced the apartment, then finally settled down to sit on the futon.
What was she doing?
It was a question she hadn't really asked herself until that moment, or not directly, at least. She had grown so caught up Stella's plight that she hadn't stopped to consider it until recently. Was she doing the right thing? It was her battle too, wasn't it? She thought so.
Other times, she wasn't so sure.
Was she nothing more than a cog in the machine that Stella was helping to maintain?
After she had given Johnny up for abduction, she had felt real regret. It had all seemed like such a good idea in theory, and harmless enough.
But that idea had dissolved as soon as she saw the look of sheer terror on Johnny Smith's face.
She regretted that, but she still believed it was for the greater good. She'd done it for the right reasons.
And their plan had worked, to a point. She was sure it had gotten through to him, though he was obviously reluctant to accept their offer. He was thinking about it, though. She knew that much.
There had also been her other plan, which had worked nearly perfectly, to a point. Ripp had taken the bait. With the alpha male out of the way, the beta had made his move. It was Stella's analogy, not hers. An amusing observation, based on her research into animal sexuality, and oddly fitting.
But somehow, that hadn't really worked out the way she planned it at all. Territories had been drawn and negotiated, but not in the way she'd expected. She didn't know all the details, but she knew that it hadn't caused the damage to pack relations that she had been hoping for.
Part of her was relieved.
She could understand why Johnny couldn't bring himself to leave Ophelia, despite their best efforts.
He was in love with her.
He was in love with her, and nothing else mattered. She could understand that.
She was in love too.
She'd decided long ago that she would go with Stella and do her part for her species. Maybe she wouldn't be with Stella every day, but she'd see her sometimes, and that was better than never seeing her at all.
As a pollination technician, Stella would spend most of her days working on pollinations, but she would return to her planet to stock up on supplies, and they would be able to see each other then.
Stella would become part of a team of four pollination technicians. That was how they worked, in groups of four, each to their own spaceship, but looking out for each other. It was for safety reasons. With the way things were becoming, that was growing in importance.
Johnny's father had been in one of the very first teams of PTs to work on The Pollination Project, and Stella admired him very much. She had met him once, just before his retirement, when she was still very young. He had given her good advice for her future career.
Stella had also been in close contact with one of the currently active PT teams during her training and her years at LFT. They had been mentors to her. Two of these, PTs No. 59 and 88, had branched from the group after a disagreement regarding their methods. They weren't the only ones. There was a lot of friction among the ranks of the PTs these days, as fear of sim retaliation increased.
PTs No. 14 and 35 had been the ones to abduct Johnny and speak to him.
PT No. 88 had been Jayne's pollinator.
Stella had shown her an image of her "mother" or "father" or whatever s/he would be considered in the arrangement, and Jayne had been grateful for that. It had been hard to grow up without any idea of who her other parent was. The mystery had always occupied some small part of her consciousness.
Now Stella was returning to join with a team of her own and would begin her pollinating career.
Jayne wondered, what would Stella's team of PTs look like?
Stella had only been gone for about half an hour, and she already missed her more than she could describe.
"I will come back for you," Stella had said.
They would wait to see about Johnny. With his father dying, it wasn't the time, but that time would come. They would approach him again, and seek an answer. Then Stella would return, and take Jayne with her. As for Johnny, and possibly others, that remained to be seen.
But what was there for her to do now, while she waited? She couldn't go on counting the minutes, and staring at the walls got old pretty fast. Time seemed to have come to a halt.
No, Jayne couldn't stay there, now that Stella was gone.
It was time for her to go home.
"STELLAAAA!"
"Wait! Stella! STELLA!"
Stella stopped and turned around to see Ripp running to catch up with her.
"Yes, Ripp? What do you want?"
Ripp sputtered and panted and gasped for air. "I... just... are you leaving? Just like that? Without saying goodbye?"
"I have to go. I don't have time for goodbyes. Also, I haven't seen you in a long time. You stopped coming around."
"Oh, yeah... that. Well, I've been kinda busy. And, you know... the Johnny thing."
"The Johnny thing?"
"The abduction. Remember?"
"Yes. Why wouldn't I remember?"
"Listen, Stella... what do you want with Johnny, anyway? I mean, I know he's the llama's ass and all that, and he's PT No. 9's son...
"But he's not really all THAT special," Ripp insisted. "In fact, he's a huge fucking pain in the ass! You wouldn't want to have him on your planet at all—trust me!"
"If you say so."
"But the truth is that we need every hybrid we can get, and Johnny is a prime candidate. He's young and skilled and strong, as you know, and he'd make a good leader for our new colony. We need hybrids like him."
"But... well, yeah, but you're not forcing him, right? He does have a choice?"
"He does. It is not my plan that anyone should be forced. We have heavily suggested it to him, and I trust that he will make the right decision. You should worry about yourself, Ripp. Let Johnny decide for himself."
"I... am. I am doing that. I mean, there's nothing I can do, is there?"
"Is that all you came here to say?"
Well, no. Yeah. Sort of. I don't really know what else to say."
"How about goodbye? I should be going..." She turned to leave, then turned back to face Ripp again.
"Before I go, I will give you some advice."
"Advice?"
"Yes, advice. I have to be honest with you, for your own good. You should be very careful in the future. Very careful about becoming a target for abduction. As a single male, you may as well have a bullseye marked on your forehead."
"A target?" Ripp gulped. "Me?! I'm not a knowledge sim. I don't even have ANY sort of knowledge. I'm completely useless. Would they really want me?"
"I'm afraid so. If you go out by yourself after dark, there is a very good chance some PT will swoop down to beam you up."
After a moment, she added, "And that includes me."
"What?! Wait a minute! But you said you wouldn't knock me up. You promised!"
"That was different. I can no longer promise you that. After today, you become my target. I'm sorry, Ripp. That's the way it is now. I'm warning you for your own good."
"Yeah, well... thanks. I guess."
"You should settle down and reproduce. It will help your odds. But with the way some PTs have been acting, there is no guarantee."
"Settle down?"
"Yes. Maybe you have a favourite mating partner you could settle with and do some breeding?"
"Yeah, maybe. But I don't know, Stella. That's a lot to think about right now. I'm not sure I'm up to it, exactly."
"Well, I'll leave you to it."
She turned her head to where the spaceship hovered above them. "They're waiting for me."
"Well, I guess this is goodbye."
"Yes, goodbye. Thank you for helping me with my research. You were my favourite sex partner. Aside from Jayne, that is. You were very helpful to me."
"Well, no problem. It was my pleasure, believe me."
"Maybe we will meet again some day."
"Yeah, maybe." For his own sake, he hoped not. Not if it meant he'd be pollinated. "Well, then I guess this is it. Bye, Stella."
"Goodbye."
And with that, she left.
It wasn't long before Jayne returned home to be with her father, who was now past his elder transition, and to Arthur, her baby brother, who was about to become a toddler.
They celebrated the occasion with a birthday cake, but the event was a rather subdued one.
Afterwards, they retired to the living room, and spoke about their respective artistic endeavors. Jayne was still painting, and her father was always anxious to hear about her work.
They didn't speak about alien matters, but it wasn't long before the topic came up on its own.
The television had been on in the background, unnoticed, until a fragment of a news story caught their attention.
"...This isn't the first time an alien spacecraft has crashed into Sim Earth. A similar incident took place in Strangetown, nearly ten years ago."
"What?" Jayne rushed to the screen.
"The recent event was clearly linked to an abduction, as residents in Desiderata Valley had been attracted from their homes earlier that night.
An adult male, scientist Edward Contrary, and his partner in both marriage and research, Opal, were abducted earlier that night, but they were not returned to his home in the typical manner, and instead plummeted in the crash, along with the craft's sole alien occupant.
The military has secured the crash site, and will question the abductees before releasing them to the hospital. They have also taken the alien abductor, who refer themselves as 'pollination technicians,' into their custody. They have released no details, but a witness has leaked the following image to the press."
Jayne observed the screen. "That's PT No. 59," she said. "One of the team of four that recently split into two factions. He's been one of the ones who have been acting carelessly. 'Gone renegade,' as Stella said, and this just proves it."
"A married couple, nearly elders, retired and with a grown child... it just doesn't seem like a good idea."
"Well, they were people of science," remarked Mr. Doe. "That isn't such a bad bet, is it?"
"No, but it's all very risky. What if one of them dies in childbirth? That will make us seem like predators who don't care at all for our victims!"
"Us?"
Jayne turned from her father. "I think you know what I'm referrring to."
He did, but they didn't speak further about it. That would come soon enough.
"Dad, your second abduction could have killed you too. Their actions are dangerous, and they put the whole mission in jeopardy. Public opposition is at an all-time high."
"Yet you still believe that it's important?"
"I'm a part of it, whether I want to be or not."
"You could choose to live your life as a sim, regardless of that connection."
"That wouldn't feel right to me."
"So you've decided to marry him? This Johnny Smith character?" He tried to hide his distaste for the whole affair, but it was difficult, as always.
"Not exactly." Jayne searched for the right words. "I'll be leaving the planet, either way. And he might come too. It depends on how things fall into place. But I'll be going, one way or the other, and I do plan to have children there, whether it's with Johnny or with some other hybrid sim."
"So you give no more care to it than that?"
"It's a different way of thinking. You can't think with a sim mind and fully understand it. I came to understand it from Stella. Remember I mentioned her? Anyway, she explained it all to me and I understand where they're coming from. They fall into their roles, and they do it for the common good."
"And you really feel that this is right for you?"
"Yes, I think maybe it is. I feel connected to it. I think I have a place in it. It's my heritage."
Beneath her feet, Arthur cried for attention.
Jayne bent down and picked up the child. "Maybe one day, you'll come join us there too, eh Arthur?"
Arthur giggled and cooed in response, since he wasn't much of a talker yet.
"If he wants to," corrected Mr. Doe. "I won't have him forced into something he doesn't want."
She could hear in his statement a reference to his own part in the mission of the aliens, which had not been willingly given, though he had never openly bemoaned it. he had been a good father to her, as he would be to Arthur, but she could only begin to imagine what it had cost him as a person.
"It's going to be fine, Dad." Jayne tickled Arthur, and he cried out in laughter again. "It'll be exciting, starting up a whole new colony like that. We'll be able to draw from our own sim heritage and make it work in the context of that planet and their culture."
"Well, I'll give them one thing. It is a much better idea to bring this mission back to their own planet. Many people resent the presence of the hybrids here."
"Exactly. We'll move as many of them as we can, and then there will be less reason to retaliate against us."
There had been another news item that reflected that growing concern, and more of these stories appeared daily.
A young man, both a hybrid alien and a successful dancer, had been attacked and beaten on the streets of Sim City.
He had been reluctant to agree that the attack had been related to his hybrid status, but the media had ran with it anyway. There had been much public debate about the issue and anything at all became fodder for the growing media frenzy.
"But they won't all leave," Mr. Doe said, gravely. "What would the aliens do? Start kidnapping the babies from their cribs before they have a choice?"
Jayne didn't answer. If it came to that, she had no doubt they would. Stella had even mentioned the possibility of hybrid PTs, sent to abduct and impregnate other hybrid sims who refused to leave Sim Earth. Would she herself consent to take on that mission? It felt like they would be forcing those that specifically wished to remain as regular sims, but did they have the luxury of choice?
"I think I'm going to go for a walk," Jayne said.
Mr. Doe paused for a couple of beats before offering a reaction. "Be careful," he said, though he knew she'd behave as she wanted to, regardless of whether he said so or not.
He watched her leave, still thinking about her as a child, a toddler, an infant. There had been a time when he could protect her, but now he could only hope she'd do the same for herself.
He often wished he'd never let the old alien in through his front door. That was when it had still been his choice to make. After that moment, he no longer had the right to make decisions for Jayne. It was her life and her choice. He wouldn't deny her that, even if he could.
That didn't mean he had to like it.
He stood above the crib, and watched his son calmly sleeping. For now, none of this concerned Arthur.
For now.
He wished it could remain that way, but he knew that his son’s day would also come.
Jayne approached the cheery yellow house, surrounded by a lush green lawn.
She noticed him, sitting on the veranda. Even from a distance, it was obviously Johnny.
He had a very distinct stature, and there was that trademark shock of sunny blond hair. She'd recognize it anywhere. She was relieved that she wouldn't have to ring the bell, but still felt a reluctance as she drew nearer to him. He didn't turn his head, but she was sure he could sense her approaching.
He wouldn't turn his head; Johnny Smith was like that. It was both infuriating and attractive to her at the same time.
She stood for a moment before speaking.
"Hi, Johnny."
He finally let himself look up, and when their eyes met, he seemed suddenly very unfamiliar to her. There was something there, in his face, that she'd never seen before.
Or was it that something was missing?
(Continue to Chapter 34)
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Date: 2009-08-19 11:42 pm (UTC)- back to lurking mode. -
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Date: 2009-08-23 01:10 am (UTC)I was pretty sneaky with that post so soon after the teaser, huh? I honestly didn't know I'd post it so soon, but things worked out well that way, so I went for it. I'm glad it was a good surprise for you. ^_^ Thank you for reading!
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Date: 2009-08-19 11:56 pm (UTC)...Erm, more later. I'm kinda in a hurry but I wanted to get that in there before I left. :P
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Date: 2009-08-23 01:20 am (UTC)Thanks for the squee. ^_^
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Date: 2009-08-19 11:58 pm (UTC)Enjoy your holiday!
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Date: 2009-08-23 02:03 am (UTC)I will try to enjoy my holiday to the fullest. Thank you.
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:12 am (UTC)Johnny definitely looks sadder for the wear. Poor guy.
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Date: 2009-08-23 02:11 am (UTC)I would say that you'll see Arthur grow up, given that certain other children will be seen to adulthood before the story ends (though I can't reveal who they are). I really do love a lot of the children born during the story, and it's a shame that I can't focus on them too much, lest I lose all focus. Maybe I'll be able to do some side-stories one day.
I'm glad that comes through. Johnny certainly has a lot on his mind.
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:16 am (UTC)JAYNE/STELLA! STELLA/JAYNE! :D But after that. Stella is really ruthless, under it all. It's actually kind of scary, and really helps drive home what this means to the aliens, what it could mean for the sims. And where the hybrids fit into everything. There's a lot of implications of lines aliens like Stella are willing to cross. :<
Ripp is just so cute and sad. "You don't want Johnny on your planet 'cause he's an pain in the ass." Like a five year old. He's just so helpless in this and he knows it, and it's sad. :(
Poor Mr. Doe. He's a daddy who never wanted to be a daddy, but he's still trying to the best he can when he can't even protect his babies any more. The pollinators, even the "good" ones, don't seem to give a lot of thought to their pollinatees, do they? Given that Jayne's obviously identified herself with the aliens, and she's talking to her father about taking his son so casually, it certainly feels like. Oh, Jayne.
So is John Mole going to be playing a role in this whole story at some point? I thought he was going to be abducted for a moment. :p He did see the whole thing, and seems the type to find crashed alien ships relevant to his interests.
IS THAT NATHAN PEET??
<3
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:29 pm (UTC)It's possible. Maybe even likely. ;)
IS THAT NATHAN PEET??
Yes.
(Sorry for the drive-by reply here, but I wanted to answer the questions, at least. I'll be back again later to comment further.)
Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:41 am (UTC)I loved the scene with Ripp and Stella in the desert with the ship there, waiting... so well done!
And I see a very Peet-looking appearance to the poor hybrid dancer. :P Always good to see a Peet!
Wonderful, as usual!
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Date: 2009-08-23 02:16 am (UTC)Thanks. I was very pleased with that animated spaceship object. It made all of those cool animations with the purple smoke, so all I had to do was find the interesting angles. I will definitely be using that in futre updates. So useful!
Yes, you'd be right. That's Nathan, using his super grouchy personality on the reporter. :P He's a character, that one.
Thank you. ^_^ And thanks for reading.
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Date: 2009-08-23 02:19 am (UTC)Mr. Doe is a rather tragic character that way, but he has learned to adapt to his life, for better or worse. I'm happy to hear that you like him. I have a bit of a soft spot for him, also.
Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2009-08-23 02:20 am (UTC)Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2009-08-20 01:25 am (UTC)I have a sneeking suspicion that Ripp will definitly become one of Stella's targets; although after his visit to Dr. Cloud he might find some pleasure in it.
Thoroughly enjoyed it and looking forward to the next update, thank you.
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Date: 2009-08-23 12:21 pm (UTC)Plenty of things have changed for Johnny since Jayne had him abducted, and they'll provide arguments to stay (Ripp and Ophelia) and arguments to go (his father), so he has a lot of think about. He'll be giving it all a lot of consideration.
We'll see about Ripp. It's not something I'm going to give away, one way or the other, but like other single males, he'll have to watch his back.
Thank you, and thanks for reading! I hope to get back on a more regular update schedule again in the fall, if at all possible.
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Date: 2009-08-20 01:58 am (UTC)I had no clue that Jayne would fall for Stella! That's nice. I mean, she's still evil and all, but it's good that she has someone else to obsess over.
Mr. Doe! baby!Alien! They're house looks so familiar.
I loved seeing Nathan Peet. He's so cute. And Lillian! I missed seeing Lillian. :D
Also, did you do the speaceship effects in the Stella pictures yourself? They're very well done.
ARGH. The whole alien issue is very, very precarious. On one hand, I completely understand that to them, the survival of their race is more important than anything else, but on the other, they have to acknowledge that they can't just grab people and get them pregnant and expect everything to be alright.
It's good that the Contrary's survived, I thought they were going to die. Did he have time to probe them, I wonder?
This was a great chapter, ST. I hope you enjoy your vacation!
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:33 pm (UTC)I used an animated spaceship from Simslice. You can make it hover there or even lift off like that. VERY useful for my purposes.
Thanks, Josh. I'll probably be back to chat again later (on dial up... *groan*), but I wanted to answer the questions, at least, before I left.
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:26 pm (UTC)That's exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote that line. :P
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 2009-08-20 02:51 am (UTC)Oh, dear. *snort* It'll be interesting to see what comes of THAT storyline.
Great update as usual. I have a real love/hate relationship with Jayne. I can see where she's coming from, but noooo don't take our Johnny away!
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Date: 2009-08-23 12:26 pm (UTC)Thank you. ^_^ If you have a love/hate relationship with any character, I feel like my job is done. Though there are "good guys" and "bad guys" in the sense of POV, I'm aiming for an ambiguous morality in this conflict. It's something I find a lot more interesting and true to life. Everybody believes they are the "good guys." Well, maybe not Circe. I'm sure she just doesn't care, being a complete misanthropist.
Thanks for reading!
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Date: 2009-08-23 12:33 pm (UTC)I have my new netbook on vacation with me, so it's making it easy to make use of travel and downtime for writing, and I'm already writing for the next 3-4 chapters. It was a good purchase (and these teeny little things are quite affordable, especially when on sale).
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Date: 2009-08-20 05:06 am (UTC)GREAT chapter! I can't wait for the next installment!
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Date: 2009-08-23 12:35 pm (UTC)I'm hoping to be back on track with regular chapter updates in the fall, so the wait shouldn't be more than 2-3 weeks for the next one.
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Date: 2009-08-20 05:34 am (UTC)The Stella thing's just too good to pass up! Really, it's right there.
I want to know and hope it's okay, where did you get Jayne's hoodie?
Commenting over.
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Date: 2009-08-20 11:58 am (UTC)Also, thank you! ^_^
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Date: 2009-08-20 05:41 am (UTC)I don't agree with the comments above of Jayne being evil or nasty. I just think she's not completely human. Not in the obvious sense -- of course she's not *genetically* completely human. I mean in the way she thinks and acts, and relates to other beings. Compare her with Johnny, for instance. Though he's just as much a hybrid being, Johnny seems fully human in his mental and emotional make-up.
But perhaps both through the early impression Johnny's father made on her, and her close association with Stella, Jayne has a bit of that alien detachment, that focus on the good of the species over the needs and rights of the individual. I hope, for Johnny's sake, that she's not beyond human compassion.
He does look so lost, there. It's amazing to me the expression you can pull out of your sims.
What alien eyes are you using? They look really good! That low shine gives them more depth and expression than my old eyes.
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Date: 2009-08-20 07:05 am (UTC)Also, Her normal eyes are from the same E/L/F sets placed on Maxis Scelara.
Hope I helped!
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Date: 2009-08-20 07:10 am (UTC)S/J is a totally cute match, and the more I think about it, I like it more than J/J. MAKE IT HAPPEN PLEASE :D
The Ripp vs Jayne scenes were done beautifully, I love how you do those Scenes - They are aeriousjy interesting how you use the two different locations, Like they are attatched, and not just different shots of the same sim and location.
More to add later, But YAYNESS! :)
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Date: 2009-08-23 04:58 pm (UTC)I bet a Stella/Jayne offspring would be super cute, though. A Stella lookalike with pointy ears would be very cute.
Phone scenes are really useful for covering things like that, but I struggle to find new ways to show them, so I try to be as creative with framing as possible. I guess that's why I come up with new ways of showing the same thing over and over again (and the same 10 facial expressions :P). I'm glad you liked the way that turned out.
Thanks for reading! ^_^
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Date: 2009-08-20 08:42 am (UTC)I especially love the take on alien abductions because you make it seem like an issue with several layers and explanations rather than taking the easy road. I've been thinking a lot about abductions lately myself for eh, story purposes and it's always refreshing to read other's thoughts.
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Date: 2009-08-23 05:02 pm (UTC)I'm glad the alien vs. sim issue comes off as a layered and complex conflict, because that's what I'm aiming for. Once the family connections of the main characters are all taken into account, it becomes a very touchy subject, indeed.
I like to read about other takes on the alien abductions in the game, also. It's one thing that isn't explained at all in the game or any of the backstories (well, minimally), so it's a place for the creativity of the storyteller to really shine.
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Date: 2009-08-20 09:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-23 05:05 pm (UTC)It was nice of her to warn him, though, wasn't it? Stella's just nice that way. ;)
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Date: 2009-08-23 05:11 pm (UTC)Yeah, I thought it was fairly well implied in other chapters, but girl/girl relationships can often read as fairly ambiguous that way, with little difference between "girl friends" and "girlfriends" (in fact, don't some girls call their friends their "girlfriends"? No wonder it's confusing). Then again, Stella's not really a girl.
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Date: 2009-08-20 12:34 pm (UTC)Ugh, I was afraid this would happen! Everything's moving so quickly, and it's really getting scary that some of the PTs are becoming so rash. The spaceship crash with PT and the Contrarys puzzles me - what happened to cause the crash?
I feel sorry for Mr. Doe, it must be terrible to feel so helpless in a situation like this, since it concerns his own family. Jayne could have been a little more considerate of her father's feelings and not start making plans so early for Arthur, who is adorable, btw! Love the Frances hairstyle.
Johnny looks like a wreck. I'm glad he's got Ripp and Ophelia, who care so much about him. Here's hoping he doesn't choose to go with Jayne, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see!
Enjoyed this chapter very much, thanks for updating!
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Date: 2009-09-11 07:41 pm (UTC)The spaceship crash in Desiderata Valley should be puzzling, much like the crash in Strangetown was puzzling. ;) That's all I'll say for now.
Mr. Doe is a good example of the sort of sim who will have their life greatly impacted by the aliens, but will more or less accept it, which is what the aliens are hoping for. He doesn't fight back.
I realized, much too late, that I should have used the version of the "Frances hairstyle" that doesn't have sideburns on Arthur (I have an edited cc version), but maybe Mr. Doe just likes to cultivate sideburns on the very young.
The death of his father will be hard on Johnny, no doubt about it.
Thank you, and thanks so much for reading!