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I decided to try the
sim_scenes challenge again this week, and I'm just barely managing to get it in before the deadline. These are a lot of fun to do.
As before, I welcome your feedback. This one's meant to be slightly ambiguous, so I'm wondering how well I've pulled that off.










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As before, I welcome your feedback. This one's meant to be slightly ambiguous, so I'm wondering how well I've pulled that off.
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Date: 2009-08-16 03:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-16 03:43 pm (UTC)(And thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.)
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Date: 2009-08-16 04:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-16 03:49 pm (UTC)I love Phi's grin at the end, lol.
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Date: 2009-08-16 04:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-16 03:58 pm (UTC)I think I get it. Phi is watching Ripp sell snapdragons to a female customer. Things start getting pretty hot and heavy when the woman's allergies start acting up; Ripp is distressed, Phi is amused. Her smug little grin at the end just seals it, I love her. <3 It says a lot about Phi and her relationship with Ripp that she finds his shenanigans amusing, rather than busting in in a jealous RAGE. Though obviously she's pleased things were interrupted before they could go any further. Very cute. ^-^
(who is the customer though? She looks so familiar, but I can't place her.)
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Date: 2009-08-16 04:03 pm (UTC)Also, thanks. ^_^ You seem to have a very good handle on the plot here, which makes me happy that it comes across so clearly.
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Date: 2009-08-16 05:07 pm (UTC)(They do have a great relationship <3)
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Date: 2009-08-16 07:08 pm (UTC)Getting rid of the compertition, were we?
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Date: 2009-08-16 07:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-16 08:32 pm (UTC)On the other hand, I love what you did with Blossom.
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Date: 2009-08-16 09:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 10:18 am (UTC)Hehe
Beautifully done.
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Date: 2009-08-17 05:07 pm (UTC)LOL at her Allergy fit though! I could totally see Ripp being all like "Oh yes, These flowers are devine, please, take a great.. long.. sniff.. take in the scent, feel their synus clearing...-"
"*WHEEZE* *COUGHCOUGHCOUGH* WHAT./IS/.THIS.PLANT? *WHEEZE* *SPLUTTER*"
[LOL!!]
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Date: 2009-08-17 10:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-18 12:19 am (UTC)