Yay for a dream sequence! It'd be very interesting to really get into one of the character's heads like that. :D I'm greatly enjoying the third person perspective mingled with bits of direct telepathy (from some of them to us) that you're doing, by the way. It's tantalizing, keeps me as a reader on my toes wanting to find out what's hidden much like a good mystery ought to. *muses* Does this mean I should invest some time in reading up on the hidden language of flowers etc? :-)
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Date: 2008-01-04 06:36 am (UTC)I'm greatly enjoying the third person perspective mingled with bits of direct telepathy (from some of them to us) that you're doing, by the way. It's tantalizing, keeps me as a reader on my toes wanting to find out what's hidden much like a good mystery ought to.
*muses* Does this mean I should invest some time in reading up on the hidden language of flowers etc? :-)