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I loved this chapter, especially Pascal, it was great seeing his close relationship with Lola and his worry for Nervous is heart-wrenching. I think that Pascal and Nervous have become a couple in every incarnation of strangetown i've had and not always by my design, an autonomous hand-holding by one of them, and subsequent instant love, has happened on more than one occasion.
I'm still in awe over the amount of work you put into your characters, i feel like i know Jasmine and Frances already although i'm sure there's more to them than meets the eye.
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Date: 2007-12-03 10:22 pm (UTC)I loved this chapter, especially Pascal, it was great seeing his close relationship with Lola and his worry for Nervous is heart-wrenching. I think that Pascal and Nervous have become a couple in every incarnation of strangetown i've had and not always by my design, an autonomous hand-holding by one of them, and subsequent instant love, has happened on more than one occasion.
I'm still in awe over the amount of work you put into your characters, i feel like i know Jasmine and Frances already although i'm sure there's more to them than meets the eye.