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Strange Tomato ([personal profile] strangetomato) wrote2008-08-21 09:48 am

Drabble: Gay

Prompt: Gay
Character: Tank Grunt
Wordcount: 100
Warnings: none




I'm trying to be okay with it, I really am. I am trying. I'm not some bigot who's shut himself off from new experiences. I can adapt.

I say that, but the truth of the matter is that it makes me uncomfortable, plain and simple. It's never going to feel normal to me.

But I'm trying.

If Frances wasn't enough, I now have Beau too. He just showed up one day and started prancing around the place like he owned it. He’s just so… gay.

See, I’m getting better. He is gay. That’s what he is.

So very, very gay.



[identity profile] simfinite.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, I love it! Actually, I love the way you do all these drabbles. They're subtle, and you can really read into them.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 12:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. The great thing about drabbles (especially if they don't go over 100 words), is there isn't enough time to go into much detail, so they're can only be these brief snippets of information. It's great for working out little ideas like this.

I could easily expand on this one, and I probably will. It needs images too. It's just crying out for them. I'm thinking of devoting a part of an upcoming chapter to Tank's point of view, so that's probably where it will end up.

[identity profile] dragancaor.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how you manage to say so much with so little.
Great drabble!
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. The drabble really forces you to do that. It's a lot of fun to write them, and I'm getting better at hitting the 100 word mark without too much re-working. You get the feel for the right length after a while.

[identity profile] muslemura.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Heehee! This seems very 'in character' for Tank :) Wonderful!
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. That's always good to hear. :)

[identity profile] cindyanne1.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Tank, lol. It's all right in his face, now. He might have been able to pretend otherwise with just Frances, but now that Beau is there... oooooohhhh... do I detect a bit of foreshadowing? Are Beau and Frances becoming closer? :D
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheh. It's soooo in his face too. Let's just say that Beau picks up on Tank's uncomfortableness pretty early on, and uses it to amuse himself. ;)

Beau and Frances do start to hang out a lot more, just as Tank said.

[identity profile] cindyanne1.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh heh heh... that promises to be amusing. :P
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope so. :)

[identity profile] meetme2theriver.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I love that - Beau amusing himself with Tank's anti-gay. So much potential for good scenes.

Great little drabble, very fitting for Tank. :) I like that he IS trying. Poor Tank.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 01:11 pm (UTC)(link)
The idea of that made me laugh, and I can imagine Beau playing it up for Tank, just to test his limits and see his reactions.

Tank's trying, and that's better than nothing. It's pretty far from his comfort zone.

[identity profile] indigoleo.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I can adapt.
:) Maybe so, but it's not going to be and easy adaptation. It definitely needs a picture or two. I can just see Beau prancing around and Tank standing in the background looking disgusted. Poor Tank.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 01:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Tank does have the ability to change like that, I think. He's not really a bad guy, and he realizes that a lot of his assumptions have gone unquestioned by him, but when he's faced with the real life details, he can't help but begin to see differently. He just usually doesn't put himself into the situation (even mentally) until it hits him in the face. Maybe it's lack of imagination, or just the way he keeps a safe distance from most things. It's just another way he differs from Ripp.

I can imagine a really funny overblown scene with Tank standing dumbstruck in the background. *snicker* I'll have to do that at some point.

[identity profile] ikichi.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
:snrk: Oh, Tank. At least you're trying. Maybe you should invite Kendra over more often? I'm sure she'd get along with them just fine.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Her name is Kendal, but I can understand mixing it up. She's a bit forgettable (so far...).

Tank's giving it his best efforts, anyway. My, my... what would Buzz think? (of all three of them, really. *snicker* He must be rolling in his grave.)

[identity profile] ikichi.livejournal.com 2008-08-23 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ugh, my bad.

"Well, at least Buck likes girls."?

[identity profile] kin-thalas.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, great drabble. Way to go, Tank!
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :) He's come a long way, hasn't he?

[identity profile] soniabigcheese.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, Tank rarely says much. But when he does, it's straight to the point. And Beau, deliberately flaunting it on front of Tank's face isn't going to help matters at all.
I just love the way you've brought out their personalities.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a great description of Tank. And yeah, Beau probably isn't helping the situation, but it's just too funny to resist.

Thank you.

[identity profile] smjoshsims.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it! It really does show Tank's personality, in such a small space.

love how he described Beau, as so very, very gay, that made me laugh so much. :)
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :) I'm really looking forward to doing some of these scenes in the game.

[identity profile] aledstrange.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
'... and started prancing around the place like he owned it'
lol that really sounds like Beau!! <3

great drabble, so Tank!
I love the part when he goes
'See, I’m getting better. He is gay. That’s what he is...'

Sweet! he's getting better ... ;)
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
The word "prancing" just sums it up, really. :P Beau is gaying up the place, gay-style. I wonder what Frances thinks of the whole thing? (I'm still thinking it through.)

Tank is learning to cope. It's a good sign for their friendship.

[identity profile] minotaurus.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, well at least he's trying. There's nothing worse than a bigot.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I can probably think of one or two things, but I agree. It's not a great thing to be.

[identity profile] inkspottedtea.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
xD xD xD

Awesome.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)

Poor Tank

[identity profile] a-gates.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel that you're going to make Tank snapped and go like temporarily insane with the gayness in the air. Lol. Keep up the good work, am still waiting for the installment.

P.S. The only reason i created a livejournal account was so I could access your pages fully.
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Re: Poor Tank

[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmmm... will he snap or just start to go with the flow? :P Well, not in every sense, but he might crack and start singing Broadway hits with them or something. (Nahh, I can't see that either...)

Wow. That's so cool. ^_^ Thank you for reading!

Re: Poor Tank

[identity profile] hannahspring.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I also created a lifejournal account for the same reason! This blog is super-cool and I missed commenting. And I think that you deserve encouraging comments. :)

[identity profile] 80sfiend.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 06:06 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice! Love hearing things that Tank is thinking, he's such a hard nut to crack. :)

[identity profile] hannahspring.livejournal.com 2008-08-22 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, had a good laugh! So very, very gay - ROFL!