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Strange Tomato ([personal profile] strangetomato) wrote2008-03-30 09:44 pm

Strangetown: Chapter 23.5 (The fish speak...)



 



Warnings: None, really. Very minor sexual references.



Chapter 23.5

The fish speak.






We are the fish. Nobody knows more about the Grunts than we do.

We've been here since the beginning. We've seen everything. We know everything.




Buck is our primary caretaker. Like everything else, if you want it done, it's best to ask Buck to do it.




Ripp pays the most attention to us, overall. He's been fascinated by us ever since he was a young boy.




Tank is more or less unconcerned about our existence. He'll feed us if he has to, and sometimes he looks in, but it's not really a priority of his. He has other, more important, things to do with his time.




We all have names. The boys know them, and remember them, but Buzz never did. That's why we ended up with such interesting names. When their father was around, we were just "the fish", but other times, we were called by our proper names.




My name is Periwinkle. It's one of Buck's favourite colours. I have a small section on one of my fins that is this colour, and it was enough to secure me the name. It has a nice ring to it, don't you think? It's a little fancy, so my friends usually call me Perry.




My name is Viridian. Like Perry, I have a colour name. A number of us do. That's children for you. Pets often end up as a Blacky or a Snowball, but little Buck had a much wider colour vocabulary, even at a young age, so we were lucky.




My name is Sixty-Nine. Ripp named me. That much should be obvious. He was about twelve years old at the time, and he still laughs at it every time he talks to me. I don't mind. It might be childish, but it makes me laugh.

Before he gave me this name, I was just "the grey one". I like the new name better.




My name is Marigold. Tank named me, if you can believe it. He named me after a flower. He says that it was Buck who thought of it, but Tank was the one who said it first. We heard him.




My name is Temptation. It's a very special name, and I'm honoured to have it. Temptation is the name of Lyla Grunt's favourite variety of red rose, which was her favourite flower. All of the boys know that she loved red roses, but only one of them knows the exact variety that was her favourite.

She revealed this fact during a misty-eyed monologue, where she mused on the siginificance of the name, and the role that it played in her life. He remembered every word. After she left, he replayed many of the things he remembered her saying, over and over in his mind, so he wouldn't forget them. He wouldn't realize what she was really talking about until he was older. Now he understands what she was talking about very well.




You might be asking yourself how old we are, and how fish could possibly live that long, and the answer is really quite simple.

We are immortal.

Simulated fish do not die. We only die if the sims stop feeding us, and we always, always get fed.




Nobody ever forgets to feed us. Not ever.




We'll let you in on a little secret. The truth is, we actually do like Mr. Shark.






Well, not really... but we do like to see Ripp happy, and it really does seem to amuse him.




We'll tolerate just about anything, as long as it lightens the mood around here.




Tank never plays around like that. He just stares in. He doesn't tap the glass. He just carefully places his hand against the side of the tank, and holds it steadily in place. His hands are so clean, he never even leaves a mark. He always grumbles as he wipes away any fingerprints that Ripp has left on the side. But mostly, he just stares silently.




We're pretty sure that he isn't really looking at us, as much as looking through us, and thinking about all of his responsibilities in life. It's what he usually thinks about, we're sure.




Tank has a lot to live up to.




Buck is the one that feeds us most often.




And he cleans the tank too. Like we said before, he's very conscientious.




Buck is a good kid.

He never taps the glass, because he knows that this sounds much louder inside the tank, and it frightens us. He doesn't play around, because he's shy, and afraid that he'll embarrass himself. He pays attention, because he likes to take care of things that he loves.




They're all pretty different, but we like them all. They each have their own strengths and their weaknesses, and they've always been there for us.














We've watched these boys grow up.




Over there is the chair that Ripp usually sits in to watch TV. You can see that it has molded itself to shape of his buttocks.




When Lyla left, Ripp asked if she was ever coming back, and the General told him to stop asking stupid questions. And Tank told him that she would, but he was wrong. Ripp clung to that hope that Tank gave him, and never stopped waiting for her to come through the door. Every time the door opened he looked up from what he was doing, expectantly. We saw him. He did it, he does it, every time. He probably doesn't even realize it anymore, but every time a door opens, Ripp hopes that the person entering the house will be his mother.




Tank believes this also. He believes that both of his parents are still alive, and he really might think that the aliens are to blame. We don't know for sure, since Tank never talks about it, but it's a very good possibility.




This is the end table where Tank lays the newspaper, neatly folded, after he is finished reading it. He reads it every day, just like the General did.




When the General disappeared, Buck sat here, alone, for a week. He spoke to us sometimes, and he cried sometimes, but mostly he slept.




It was also here, in this room, that Buck kissed Jill Smith for the first time.




We didn't mean to watch them, but it was hard not to.




Really, we're lucky that the General didn't allow for the usual cat or dog, since that left us with more attention than fish usually get. The General hated the idea of pet hair on the furniture.




Most of the attention came from Ripp, of course. The sad thing is, we probably gave him more attention in return than his father ever did. Aside from negative attention, he didn't get much. He suffered for it.

When someone thinks that you'll grow up badly, it can become a self-fulfilling prophesy.




Sometimes we'd do tricks for him, as well as we're capable of. He seemed to get a kick out of it if we made it look like we were kissing.




Tank thinks that it's a waste of time, like most of the things that Ripp does. He doesn't have much patience for Ripp's foolish behaviour, but we appreciated it. Fish like to be social too. Ripp has always been a good friend to us.




He really is just trying to be happy. Tank should give him a break.




We can tell that you have a lot of questions for us, since we seem to know so much about the Grunt family. How much have we seen? Where will they go from here? Will they stick together as brothers, through all of the struggles that they will surely face? Will the Grunts be able to overcome their past and learn to really live life to the fullest?




We're just the fish. How would we know?







 

[identity profile] jessicus.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Fantastic perspective. The fish are a little pervy watching Buck and Jill make out, hee. They like Mr Shark. I knew it! ;]
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, how cool! When did you do that? Was it part of the
Ishkabibbles?

Well, real fish aren't even supposed to have very much of a memory, are they? We'll just have to assume that simulated fish are more intelligent, and they remember everything. :D I like the idea of them being so reflective, since it's not really expected of them.

I used InSIM to age them all down, and re-styled them to match their younger versions. I had a lot of shots like these, but not through the fish tank, so I just re-did them. I really wouldn't be able to work on stories without InSIM now. I take so much of what it does for granted. I really want to give Free Time a try, but I'm content to wait until they update InSIM (and hopefully the EP will be patched by then too).
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't apologize. There's nothing wrong with a little insight!

I think that Tank probably does blame himself, or at least he feels that he's responsible for keeping himself (and the family) together, and he can't let his father down, even now. I don't think that Tank was getting everything he needed from Buzz either, but he was getting something, and maybe he feels a little guilty about that too, on top of everything else. He has a lot on his shoulders.

(Also, it seems like Tank has loosened up and found himself some happiness in your icon! :D Looks like a good time.)
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, good! I was hoping to get a laugh with that. :D Especially since the fish are so serious!

Heheh. Sixty-Nine. Ripp, Ripp, Ripp... *snicker*

It was pretty hard to maneuver inside the fish tank, but I got the hang of it after a while. I needed to use a very light touch on the camera.

I know that some people can't see the fishes, which is a shame, so I figured that since I'm able to see them, I should take advantage of it. I laughed at the fact that you can basically count the pixels when you zoom up really close to them.

I'm glad you liked that part. I like doing the family stuff the best too, because family is such a powerful thing, even when things get as bad as they did with the Grunts. I think it will be what saves them, in the end, if they stick together.

Thank you.

[identity profile] indigoleo.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
That was so neat! A little history from the fishes point of view.
The idea of doing a story from something besides a sims POV is really interesting. Although I would hope it wouldn't be from one of my womrats that I accidentally forgot to feed (I lost two different ones that way).
You have some very deep thinking and observant fish there and it was really wonderful seeing the family through their eyes.
You made all your fish-fans very happy.

[identity profile] franwi.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
THAT was adorable. Brilliant, really. What a great way to give a little extra insight into the Grunt family, through the eyes of the fishies. You even included flashback moments through the aquarium, this was wonderful. ;)

[identity profile] pixelcurious.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
You put so much work into your stories, it really amazes me. And the extra work shows -- there's a beautiful consistency with these images.

My parrot story was set on Mnemosyne, with two characters that came from Madame Ugly, Onus and Jupiter Khillian, along with their parrot, Boom Boom. ^_^
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I aged them down with InSIM for this. The idea to do this just popped in my head after the last chapter (with Mr. Shark and all that, I got inspired).
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
The sixth fish is the mystery fish.

But really, I just messed up. *snicker* Maybe that angelfish was shy, and didn't want to introduce himself. (Could I go back and add him in now, after the fact?) At one point I did count six fish, but when I went in to take close ups, I only found five. He must have been hiding.

Now, let me divert your attention away from searching through other chapters for continuity errors... :P (You will find MANY, believe me.)
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Fish (fan) service for all! :D Glad you liked it.

Thanks. I knew I wanted a rose name, and that one was so fitting for Lyla.

[identity profile] 80sfiend.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
Yay update! :D I always get SO excited when I see that you've updated. :D I usually squeal a bit. :P

Yay fishies! Those fish DO have a fanbase. ;)

This was a very cute update. :D Those fish really have seen a lot. :D
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :) I'm glad you think so.

I remember seeing that post now! It's really good. I love all of the references to bird-like things, like calling their noses beaks, and calling the guys roosters. And Boom Boom saying that he hadn't named them yet. :D Very cute.

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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. It was interesting to figure out what exactly I could show from that vantage point. Plenty of activity did happen in that room, and the hallway, so I was lucky there. It's pretty much the center of Grunt life.

Ahhh, they needed that hug. :)

[identity profile] thelesserfaith.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I've been reading your Strangetown story for some time now, but I don't think I've actually commented. This was probably my favorite chapter so far. It was really unique.

Thank you for this!

[identity profile] kin-thalas.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this. I think if trees or pets could talk, they could tell a lot about their families or the life around them. Would be very interesting, amusing and shocking.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Those fish were just dying to star in a chapter of their own, so who am I to refuse them? I'm glad you liked the names. It was fun to think them up.

Thanks. The next chapter shouldn't be too far off. It will probably be a two-parter. Not so much because it's long, but because I just want to break it up into two smaller parts. And there is a nice, natural break in the middle. We'll get to see a bit more of Strangetown.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. It was fun to do for a change of pace. The fish are able to give us a little more insight into the Grunts, since they don't often talk about that stuff. Even Ripp and Buck keep a lot of those feelings bottled up.

Sixty-Nine. *snicker* Like Ripp, I'm easily amused.

Ripp gets inspired by the fish? Hmmm... now you've piqued my interest.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :) The fish must have learned to be pervy from Ripp. They pick up behaviours that they observe, maybe? *snicker* And everyone loves Mr. Shark!
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
I agree. It's fun to experiment with unexpected points of view. (I'd love to see a story told by a womrat.)

As long as the fish fans are happy, all is well in Strangetown. *grin* Glad you liked it.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It was a good excuse to squeeze in a little more insight into the Grunts, and I do like to do that. *grin* I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. The fish see everything. Well, everything that happens in that one room, anyway! :P
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 10:00 am (UTC)(link)
Hello there. It's great to hear from you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Thank you for reading.
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[identity profile] strange-tomato.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 10:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Isn't that the truth, though? I'd be afraid to hear what my cat might say about me, if she could tell her story. I'll bet she has lots of great dirt on me. They see everything.

[identity profile] smjoshsims.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how you took shots from insdie the tank, thats so cool. I'll go with the others and say that Ripp named Temptation. :)

[identity profile] amaryssobellus.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I must have missed this one... I don't know what made me check your journal today but I'm glad I did.

How cool that the fish get their own spotlight! And to see things from their perspective. They've been there forever by now.

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