Ahh! I've been waiting for this update for days! YAY!
And I'm so glad that Buck's feelings are out in the open now. Maybe Jill will realize that Buck is a really good guy for her?
And to see Pascal reunited with Nervous makes me all sorts of happy! My heart sank though, when I saw Ripp looking at what appears to be either his mother's or father's gravestone. And it's worse, because he's definitely not ready to share that info with his friends.
It's unnerving how dense Johnny is about drug education though, automatically assuming the worst of his best friend. Why can't he ever give Ripp the benefit of the doubt on things? This just makes him seem a bit jerkish, and worse, because he's not remotely apologetic about things. I guess I have a thing against guys who act like Johnny. I know Johnny has his good points, but sometimes, bad points speak louder than the good points. That said, he did do a good job of making Ripp understand that you don't mess with your sister, during part 1.
Those are my first thoughts. Thank you so much for posting part 2. I've been looking forward to it since Part 1 (didn't want to say anything then, because I wanted to see how the chapter ended). You're a great story teller. Especially since you give such depth to your characters. They're not all Mary-Sues, and I appreciate that. So thanks.
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And I'm so glad that Buck's feelings are out in the open now. Maybe Jill will realize that Buck is a really good guy for her?
And to see Pascal reunited with Nervous makes me all sorts of happy! My heart sank though, when I saw Ripp looking at what appears to be either his mother's or father's gravestone. And it's worse, because he's definitely not ready to share that info with his friends.
It's unnerving how dense Johnny is about drug education though, automatically assuming the worst of his best friend. Why can't he ever give Ripp the benefit of the doubt on things? This just makes him seem a bit jerkish, and worse, because he's not remotely apologetic about things. I guess I have a thing against guys who act like Johnny. I know Johnny has his good points, but sometimes, bad points speak louder than the good points. That said, he did do a good job of making Ripp understand that you don't mess with your sister, during part 1.
Those are my first thoughts. Thank you so much for posting part 2. I've been looking forward to it since Part 1 (didn't want to say anything then, because I wanted to see how the chapter ended). You're a great story teller. Especially since you give such depth to your characters. They're not all Mary-Sues, and I appreciate that. So thanks.