Thank you. I'm glad that you've been enjoying it so far.
I love Nervous too, and, as I have mentioned to several others, I'll be happy to get him out of "the pit". Then we can begin to deal with one more extremely trouble character a little more closely.
I find myself surprised that people keep assuming that the baby will be okay. The baby is still inside Circe, so it's going to be difficult for the baby to live if Circe dies - impossible, really. The baby is a factor, for sure, but I wouldn't assume anything. Pregnancy makes Circe a little more defensive, but the situation makes them vulnerable too. Olive knows exactly how to play to their weaknesses. Don't worry about that.
You're right. The Beakers aren't quite the pure evil that Olive is. And well, General Buzz wasn't either, was he? They could be redeemable, but Olive Specter doesn't do things that way. She's going to attempt to kill them. If they live, it will have to be by their own wits or the grace of some other person or force. Olive won't pity them.
Will Olive pay the price? Not everything is fair, but maybe karma will catch up with her in the end. I won't say anything more.
You have some very interesting thoughts on the matter with Nervous, but I obviously can't talk too much on it right now. We'll get the truth in the next chapter, so you'll have to wait until then to see which of your ideas, if any, might be correct.
Hmmm, you think you know what I'll do with Jill and Buck? We'll see. There are obviously a couple of roads it could go down. We'll see if you've been reading it correctly.
I'm hoping to get the next update up over the weekend if time allows. I have to do some shooting for it, but some of it is already done. It depends on how much time I have, but I can't see it being any later than early into the week, even if it's rough going.
You're English is fine! Better than most. Thanks for the comments, and for reading everything so far. I really do appreciate it. :)
Re: Keep writing, please!
I love Nervous too, and, as I have mentioned to several others, I'll be happy to get him out of "the pit". Then we can begin to deal with one more extremely trouble character a little more closely.
I find myself surprised that people keep assuming that the baby will be okay. The baby is still inside Circe, so it's going to be difficult for the baby to live if Circe dies - impossible, really. The baby is a factor, for sure, but I wouldn't assume anything. Pregnancy makes Circe a little more defensive, but the situation makes them vulnerable too. Olive knows exactly how to play to their weaknesses. Don't worry about that.
You're right. The Beakers aren't quite the pure evil that Olive is. And well, General Buzz wasn't either, was he? They could be redeemable, but Olive Specter doesn't do things that way. She's going to attempt to kill them. If they live, it will have to be by their own wits or the grace of some other person or force. Olive won't pity them.
Will Olive pay the price? Not everything is fair, but maybe karma will catch up with her in the end. I won't say anything more.
You have some very interesting thoughts on the matter with Nervous, but I obviously can't talk too much on it right now. We'll get the truth in the next chapter, so you'll have to wait until then to see which of your ideas, if any, might be correct.
Hmmm, you think you know what I'll do with Jill and Buck? We'll see. There are obviously a couple of roads it could go down. We'll see if you've been reading it correctly.
I'm hoping to get the next update up over the weekend if time allows. I have to do some shooting for it, but some of it is already done. It depends on how much time I have, but I can't see it being any later than early into the week, even if it's rough going.
You're English is fine! Better than most. Thanks for the comments, and for reading everything so far. I really do appreciate it. :)