ext_28096 ([identity profile] tanathir.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] strangetomato 2008-11-12 08:20 am (UTC)

It's good to see this story back! It's definitely not a turd.

I like the change in point of view for this chapter; getting into Nervous' mind a little deeper is pretty cool, and it's also nice to see the J/R/O relationship from an outsider's perspective. As for Circe...I highly suspect she's done more than extend a hand of friendship to Jenny.

But the biggest reaction to this chapter: NOOOO NOT PT! There's going to be so much sadness when he's gone. And the emotional fallout afterward...oh boy.

Damn you're good.

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