ext_122336 ([identity profile] meetme2theriver.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] strangetomato 2008-06-14 11:12 am (UTC)

"Vidcund was more careful, more responsible."

Lol. If only you knew, Pascal. Oh man, poor Lazlo. He needs to find himself a more compatible girlfriend. It is of course well within Crystal's rights to not want to have a baby, but it was very unfair of her to not tell Lazlo about this before.

Vidcund + Circe = Nothing But Trouble. Nice touch bringing Don in there. Don is just hilarious, really.

I love Buck. <3 The scene with Lucy was nice. She's another character I like. Beau + Lucy is a kind of Pleasantview parallell to Buck + Jill, to me, both sort of in personality and appearence.

Not sure how I feel about Ripp's haircut... I'm curious though.

I do love Frances' haircut. I've been sort of looking through the Broke legacy without really reading it yet, and I still had a hunch that that was Tim. He's cool.

Finally, I really like how you did the zoom-outs/zoom-ins between the different scenes. Very nice touch.

Looking forward to part 2. :)

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