Sweet! I finally caught up with your updates! I'm loving this story, and I'm so glad to see you are still inspired and updating it frequently ^^.
From your previous chapters, I'm now really interested in the whole deal with Nervous Subject. Yikes! Loki and Circe are really evil, the whole torture part was terrifying and you actually made me feel sorry for poor, poor Nervous. And now that Olive is looking for him (and from the dreams), it seems like things are going to get really ugly. Olive is also a monster! Oh! And I love "Osiris" as Nervous' real name :).
I also enjoyed how you wrote the Curious brothers. Pascal is a sweetheart :). I've only played with them a little bit, but they are funny. And it seems that it's true that Nervous walks by the Curious house when Pascal gives birth. I never noticed that :S. The discussion between Pascal and Loki was awesome too... although it makes me worry about the things Loki is capable to do to both Pascal and little Mint. He's a maniac :S.
I'm glad that Ophelia is safe at La Fiesta Tech now. And I'm looking forward to their adventures at college. Yikes! I can't even imagine what'd happen if Ripp discovered that his dear Dad is also woo hooing Genesis.
"You are the most fucking beautiful woman I have ever met." LOL, Ripp. That's so classy! ;)
And I feel so sorry for Tank :(. He might be a jerk, but I guess that's the way he was raised.
I also thought that P.T.'s proposal to Jayne was to become a Pollination Tech or to join the alien population in space. The arranged marriage is an even better idea and now I'm worried about Ophelia :(. Jayne is adorable, though ^^. I'm so glad to see her back!
Man, I'm sure I'm forgetting something. Anyway, I hope you update soon and thanks for sharing this story with us ^^.
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Sweet! I finally caught up with your updates! I'm loving this story, and I'm so glad to see you are still inspired and updating it frequently ^^.
From your previous chapters, I'm now really interested in the whole deal with Nervous Subject. Yikes! Loki and Circe are really evil, the whole torture part was terrifying and you actually made me feel sorry for poor, poor Nervous. And now that Olive is looking for him (and from the dreams), it seems like things are going to get really ugly. Olive is also a monster! Oh! And I love "Osiris" as Nervous' real name :).
I also enjoyed how you wrote the Curious brothers. Pascal is a sweetheart :). I've only played with them a little bit, but they are funny. And it seems that it's true that Nervous walks by the Curious house when Pascal gives birth. I never noticed that :S. The discussion between Pascal and Loki was awesome too... although it makes me worry about the things Loki is capable to do to both Pascal and little Mint. He's a maniac :S.
I'm glad that Ophelia is safe at La Fiesta Tech now. And I'm looking forward to their adventures at college. Yikes! I can't even imagine what'd happen if Ripp discovered that his dear Dad is also woo hooing Genesis.
"You are the most fucking beautiful woman I have ever met."
LOL, Ripp. That's so classy! ;)
And I feel so sorry for Tank :(. He might be a jerk, but I guess that's the way he was raised.
I also thought that P.T.'s proposal to Jayne was to become a Pollination Tech or to join the alien population in space. The arranged marriage is an even better idea and now I'm worried about Ophelia :(. Jayne is adorable, though ^^. I'm so glad to see her back!
Man, I'm sure I'm forgetting something. Anyway, I hope you update soon and thanks for sharing this story with us ^^.