He wondered momentarily about her pollinator, who would most likely remain a mystery to them both. What he would know about him, or her, would be limited to the ways that Mint differed from him.
I love the name! And I really like how he'll get a glimpse of his PT through his daughter.

The rest - OMG, chilling and awesome. So dark and evil, but thrilling. Nervous!! He really has to get out of there. And the worst was yet to come Makes ME nervous!