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Strange Tomato ([personal profile] strangetomato) wrote2011-02-06 08:23 pm
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Cousincest, or "How to get around the game's family ties in three easy steps."

Remember this post about Audrey Broke and Alonzo Burb in my last version of Pleasantview? A helpful anon recently pointed out (via Formspring - feel free to ask me a question, if ya wanna) that they're actually related. Audrey is the daughter of Daniel Pleasant and Kaylynn Langerak and Alonzo is the son of John and Jennifer Burb, which makes them... wait for it... FIRST cousins. Eeep! That's a little close for comfort.

It's funny I didn't pick up on it, but I can always blame it on the fact that adoption erases the old family tree in favour of the adopted family's. Audrey was not longer linked to Daniel, so the relationship didn't show up. And in story terms, they probably wouldn't have known about it either, so it really could have happened. It certainly creates some drama, in true Pleasantview fashion.

It won't be an issue anymore, since I didn't clone off those two for the uberhood (I stuck to the essential characters only), so there'll be an Audrey and Alonzo (I'll reuse the names), but they probably won't be dating this time.

Im resurecting my Ripp Grunt

(Anonymous) 2011-02-07 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
It took me a year to read 3 years of posts and im loving SHWC please oh please get another update sometime soon please I cant wait to see what happens with Ripp Johnny and Ophelia. its so weird because in my strangetown story i had Ripp die at the hands of olive on ophelias birthday before he even reached young adulthood and so completely missed his story line potential and am now kicking myself in the A double snakes. but you are definately an inspiration your writing talent is beyond this world and I just thought id give praise where praise is due. From a well intrigued fan.