How Jessica got her groove back.

[strangetomato]

I've agreed to help meetme2theriver fix the premade sims with broken genetics (due to being created from broken templates — see her post for more details), which will essentially involve me recreating some of these sims from scratch using the fixed templates. Not exactly simple, but it's sort of like solving a puzzle, so I thought it'd be kinda fun.

Here's where you come in: I need feedback. I know my first draft isn't perfect, but I need some fresh eyes to have a look at it and to help me decide what else needs to be done. If you're good with BodyShop sliders, feel free to pick her apart and offer suggestions.

 

This last angle is the least accurate, but also the most difficult for me to figure out. Advice is very welcome.




 

 

Comments

[cosmetical.livejournal.com]

They are really close. I'd say the upper lip needs a little more fullness, forehead should come out a click, and jaw should probably go in a click. Maybe go a bit wider in the nose? It's really hard to tell, which is probably a good testimony to how well you're doing.

Edit: oops. I assumed yours on the left. If that isn't so, I guess you would do the opposite of any of these suggestions. :P

[strange-tomato.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the help. The forehead seems like an easy fix to me now. The lips and nose weren't obvious to me at all, but they are now, so thanks for that! This was really helpful. ^_^