I LOVE the way the POV is in this little segment! It's very cute... Yet it kind of made me want to cry at the same time. Especially the part about Ripp waiting for his mother to come back. Oh, and I love the name sixty-nine hehe.

It's funny, because I've planned the next entry of my story to have the fish be a large part of it as well. Not in their point of view... But let's just say they give Ripp some inspiration for something.