I really liked how you described the relationships that exist among the Grunt family members. Ripp and Buck are favourites, of course, but I think that perhaps you've got a lot more planned for Tank than what you've written so far? From what I've read, it seems like he's got a lot more hidden depths than what's immediately obvious right now...
Take this line, for example, about Tank's and Ripp's individual relationships with Buck: Both Tank and Ripp spent time with Buck, and each hoped he would be an ally to them, though Ripp was doing a much better job.
Sounds like Tank's lonely, & hoping to have someone on his side while he strives to become like his father. It's kinda sad that none of his brothers are like him and that he's the one designated to follow as closely as possible in his father's footsteps, and I can't wait to see how this situation will turn out. :)
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Take this line, for example, about Tank's and Ripp's individual relationships with Buck:
Both Tank and Ripp spent time with Buck, and each hoped he would be an ally to them, though Ripp was doing a much better job.
Sounds like Tank's lonely, & hoping to have someone on his side while he strives to become like his father. It's kinda sad that none of his brothers are like him and that he's the one designated to follow as closely as possible in his father's footsteps, and I can't wait to see how this situation will turn out. :)